Re: [tsvwg] Rev 13 of : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13.txt

David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com> Sun, 22 March 2020 23:55 UTC

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From: David Schinazi <dschinazi.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 22 Mar 2020 16:55:41 -0700
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Subject: Re: [tsvwg] Rev 13 of : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13.txt
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I went through the diff from -12 and -13 and didn't see that addressing my
concerns [1].

I still personally oppose publication of the document as-is.

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/tsvwg/nnSr8_nrw7YepWFWA7tLc1k3Nv0/

Thanks,
David

On Sat, Mar 21, 2020 at 6:40 AM Eric Rescorla <ekr@rtfm.com> wrote:

> I do not believe that this version of the document addresses my concerns.
> The overall tonal issues remain unchanged.
>
> -Ekr
>
>
> On Sat, Mar 21, 2020 at 5:18 AM Gorry Fairhurst <gorry@erg.abdn.ac.uk>
> wrote:
>
>> Thanks to all who provided comments on and off list, this document was
>> improved by understanding the feedback. We worked with the document
>> shepherd (David) to address the issues, and expect this revision is now in
>> good shape to proceed.
>>
>> Gorry (as Co-Editor)
>>
>> Sent from my iPad
>>
>> > On 21 Mar 2020, at 10:07, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> >
>> > 
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> > This draft is a work item of the Transport Area Working Group WG of the
>> IETF.
>> >
>> >        Title           : Considerations around Transport Header
>> Confidentiality, Network Operations, and the Evolution of Internet
>> Transport Protocols
>> >        Authors         : Godred Fairhurst
>> >                          Colin Perkins
>> >    Filename        : draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13.txt
>> >    Pages           : 50
>> >    Date            : 2020-03-21
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >   To protect user data and privacy, Internet transport protocols have
>> >   supported payload encryption and authentication for some time.  Such
>> >   encryption and authentication is now also starting to be applied to
>> >   the transport protocol headers.  This helps avoid transport protocol
>> >   ossification by middleboxes, while also protecting metadata about the
>> >   communication.  Current operational practice in some networks inspect
>> >   transport header information within the network, but this is no
>> >   longer possible when those transport headers are encrypted..  This
>> >   document discusses the possible impact when network traffic uses a
>> >   protocol with an encrypted transport header.  It suggests issues to
>> >   consider when designing new transport protocols or features.  These
>> >   considerations arise from concerns such as network operations,
>> >   prevention of network ossification, enabling transport protocol
>> >   evolution and respect for user privacy.
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt/
>> >
>> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13
>> >
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13
>> >
>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tsvwg-transport-encrypt-13
>> >
>> >
>> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
>> submission
>> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>> >
>> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
>> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
>> >
>>
>>