Re: [Unbearable] Review by Michael Jones of draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-07
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From: Andrei Popov <Andrei.Popov@microsoft.com>
To: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>, "unbearable@ietf.org" <unbearable@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Unbearable] Review by Michael Jones of draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-07
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Thanks; will fix in the next revision. Cheers, Andrei From: Unbearable [mailto:unbearable-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mike Jones Sent: Wednesday, March 15, 2017 9:46 PM To: unbearable@ietf.org Subject: [Unbearable] Review by Michael Jones of draft-ietf-tokbind-negotiation-07 These were the only things I found that I'd suggest changing in this specification. Section 3: Delete the comma from "The server that supports Token Binding and receives a client hello message containing the "token_binding" extension, will include the "token_binding" extension in the server hello if all of the following conditions are satisfied". Section 6: Change "TokenBinding" to "Token Binding". -- Mike