[Uta] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05

Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 15 April 2024 15:38 UTC

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Subject: [Uta] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05

Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2024-04-15
IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The I-D is ready to be published as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits/editorial comments:
1. Section 5, second paragraph uses non-normative "must not use" as opposed to
a "SHOULD NOT use" as in the first paragraph of Section 4.  I suspect this is a
decision borne out by discussions on the UTA WG, so I left it as a nit.  In
case it is an oversight, well, hope the nit helps.

Thanks,

- vijay

[Uta] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-uta-c… Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker