[Uta] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05: (with COMMENT)

[Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-05: No Objection

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Thanks for the work done in this document.

Abstract (and section 1): s/The Syslog Working Group published/The IETF
published/

Section 1: what is "out-of-date" in `the use of out-of-date TLS/DTLS versions`
? TLS 1.2 is not yet obsolete. Suggest to use "not recent" or "not the latest".
Does this qualification collide with `Implementations of [RFC5425] MUST
continue to use TLS 1.2` of section 4 ?