Re: [v6ops] FW: New Version Notification for draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02.txt

Hi Jordi,

Some comments:

- I think a short "Definition of IPv4-only" would be useful to include.

- Just a typing error in the beginning of the 2nd paragraph in 2. Context
It says: "Even if ossible".

- In 4. Dual-stack

I would change "IPv4 and IPv6 are reachable" with "IPv4 and IPv6 are 
reachable and used".   Not just natively something is used.

BEST,
SALUDOS,
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Azael Fernandez Alcantara
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On Tue, 17 Oct 2017, JORDI PALET MARTINEZ wrote:

> I’ve posted a new version of this document.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only/?include_text=1
>
> As usual, inputs welcome!
>
> Regards,
> Jordi
> 
>
> -----Mensaje original-----
> De: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Responder a: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Fecha: martes, 17 de octubre de 2017, 14:18
> Para: Jordi Palet <jordi.palet@consulintel.es>, Jordi Palet Martinez <jordi.palet@consulintel.es>
> Asunto: New Version Notification for draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02.txt
>
>
>    A new version of I-D, draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02.txt
>    has been successfully submitted by Jordi Palet Martinez and posted to the
>    IETF repository.
>
>    Name:		draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only
>    Revision:	02
>    Title:		IPv6-only Terminology Definition
>    Document date:	2017-10-16
>    Group:		Individual Submission
>    Pages:		5
>    URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02.txt
>    Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only/
>    Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02
>    Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02
>    Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-palet-v6ops-ipv6-only-02
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>    Abstract:
>       This document defines the terminology regarding the usage of
>       expressions such as "IPv6-only", in order to avoid confusions when
>       using them in IETF and other documents, in reference to what is the
>       actual functionalities being used (not the actual protocol support).
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