Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sun, 26 July 2020 22:14 UTC

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Subject: Re: [v6ops] I-D Action: draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04.txt
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Hi,

IMHO this is useful work.

> A number of recent RFCs have discussed issues related to IPv6 extension headers,

I suggest to add RFC7045 to the bullet list, and delete the reference to it
in the previous paragraph. In fact, the structure of the "Previous Work"
section is a bit strange, with a prose paragraph followed by a bullet list.
Maybe restructure that (e.g. transform it into a single longer bullet list)?

Regards
   Brian

On 26-Jul-20 17:28, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> 
> 
>         Title           : Operational Implications of IPv6 Packets with Extension Headers
>         Authors         : Fernando Gont
>                           Nick Hilliard
>                           Gert Doering
>                           Warren Kumari
>                           Geoff Huston
> 	Filename        : draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 15
> 	Date            : 2020-07-25
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document summarizes the security and operational implications of
>    IPv6 extension headers, and attempts to analyze reasons why packets
>    with IPv6 extension headers may be dropped in the public Internet.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-gont-v6ops-ipv6-ehs-packet-drops-04
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