Re: [v6ops] Charter discussion

Owen DeLong <owen@delong.com> Thu, 30 July 2015 20:59 UTC

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second paragraph of “4.”
…on possible ways how to deploy…

Suggest delete how leaving … on possible ways to deploy …

Next (third) paragraph: …and the primary intent is not capture the…
Suggest add the word “to” … and the primary intent is not to capture the…

Otherwise, looks good to me.

Owen

> On Jul 30, 2015, at 13:44 , Fred Baker (fred) <fred@cisco.com> wrote:
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> As we discussed last week in the f2f meeting, here is a proposed new charter for v6ops. Comments please, with proposed text (e.g., old text and new text) for any changes you'd like.
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> <v6ops-proposed-charter-v4.txt><Diff: v6ops-charter.txt - v6ops-proposed-charter-v4.txt.pdf>_______________________________________________
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