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Re: [v6ops] Mickael's Comments (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-19.txt)

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Tue, 24 February 2015 07:33 UTC

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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
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Subject: Re: [v6ops] Mickael's Comments (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-mobile-device-profile-19.txt)
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Re-,

Please see inline.

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Mikael Abrahamsson [mailto:swmike@swm.pp.se]
> Envoyé : mardi 24 février 2015 08:25
> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed IMT/OLN
> Cc : v6ops@ietf.org
> Objet : Re: Mickael's Comments (was RE: I-D Action: draft-ietf-v6ops-
> mobile-device-profile-19.txt)
> 
> On Tue, 24 Feb 2015, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> 
> > Hi Mickael,
> >
> > This new version integrates your comments (http://www.ietf.org/mail-
> archive/web/v6ops/current/msg21487.html).
> >
> > Please double check it and let me know if it OK with you.
> 
> Hi,
> 
> I am reading the diff between -18 and -19. You've changed the terminology
> to include 802.11. I believe it's unwise to go down this path, because I
> know of devices with 3GPP baseband that can connect to bluetooth, to wired
> ethernet, I can probably dig up 802.15.4 as well. I would recommend to
> make this more generalized.

[Med] The definition does not include 802.11. Below the text as it appears in the new version:

   o  "3GPP cellular host" (or cellular host for short) denotes a 3GPP
      device which can be connected to 3GPP mobile networks.

   o  "3GPP cellular device" (or cellular device for short) refers to a
      cellular host which supports the capability to share its WAN (Wide
      Area Network) connectivity.

> 
> page 4 line 48
> 
> "Moreover, this profile covers cellular CPEs"
> 
> I would add an "also" in there, for instance "... this profile also
> convers...."

[Med] Works for me.

> 
> Apart from that, the new text shown in the -18 to -19 diff looks fine to
> me.
> 

[Med] Cool! Thank you.

> 
> --
> Mikael Abrahamsson    email: swmike@swm.pp.se

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