[v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)

Alissa Cooper via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Wed, 10 July 2019 19:24 UTC

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Subject: [v6ops] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: (with COMMENT)
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Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-v6ops-nat64-deployment-07: No Objection

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It is strange to me that this document interleaves figures that are numbered
and figures that are lettered.

= Section 4.4.2 =

"A new trend is for ..."

This will not age well, probably better to phrase this in a timeless fashion.