Re: [VCARDDAV] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Mon, 31 October 2011 04:34 UTC
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Subject: Re: [VCARDDAV] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00
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Hi Roni, thank you for the review. Comments inline. On 10/29/11 9:44 AM, Roni Even wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments > you may receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-vcarddav-kind-app-00 > > Reviewer: Roni Even > > Review Date: 2011–10–29 > > IETF LC End Date: 2011–10–20 > > IESG Telechat date: 2011-11-3 > > > > Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. > > > > Major issues: > > > > > > Minor issues: > > > > > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > I noticed that the example in section 3 is presented as XML but I did > not see any text about adding the new kind to the relax NG schema. > > > > “property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" | > "org" | "location" }* }” RFC 6351 defines "property-kind" as follows: ### property-kind = element kind { element text { "individual" | "group" | "org" | "location" | x-name | iana-token }* } ### New values are supported by means of the "iana-token" construction. See Section 6.1.4 of RFC 6350: An iana-token. Additional values may be registered with IANA (see Section 10.3.4). A new value's specification document MUST specify which properties make sense for that new kind of vCard and which do not. Peter -- Peter Saint-Andre https://stpeter.im/
- Re: [VCARDDAV] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcard… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [VCARDDAV] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-vcard… Roni Even