[VCARDDAV] review of draft-li-vcarddav-vcard-id-property-extensions

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Wed, 22 June 2011 20:58 UTC

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Subject: [VCARDDAV] review of draft-li-vcarddav-vcard-id-property-extensions
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<hat type='individual'/>

This is a fine document. One small request, could we put place of birth
first? It's depressing to start out with DEATHDAY. :)

I'd modify the first paraghraph as so:

   The base vCard 4.0 specification [I-D.ietf-vcarddav-vcardrev]
   defines a large number of properties, including date of birth.
   This specification adds three new properties to vCard 4.0, for
   place of birth, place of death, and date of death.

Nit: "can only b present" in Section 2.1.


Peter Saint-Andre