[VRRP] Please clear draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-spec 3
Stephen Nadas <stephen.nadas@ericsson.com> Fri, 02 October 2009 14:45 UTC
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From: Stephen Nadas <stephen.nadas@ericsson.com>
To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
Date: Fri, 02 Oct 2009 10:46:19 -0400
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Subject: [VRRP] Please clear draft-ietf-vrrp-unified-spec 3
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Hi Jari, Will the below changes to the figures (analogous to the other not shown here) let you clear this comment? Thanks, Steve Comment text: In the figures illustrating sample configurations in section 4, it is not clear which IP address labels denote a host's own IP address vs. which denote the IP address of the router that a host is using. Both is currently denoted "IPvX A" in the figure. Suggest distinguishing the two types of labels more clearly. Blue is proposed new "text": +-----------+ +-----------+ | Rtr1 | | Rtr2 | |(MR VRID=1)| |(BR VRID=1)| | | | | VRID=1 +-----------+ +-----------+ IPvX A--------->* *<---------IPvX B | | | | ------------------+------------+-----+----------+----------+----------+-- ^ ^ ^ ^ | | | | default rtr IPvX addresses ---> (IPvX A) (IPvX A) (IPvX A) (IPvX A) | | | | | | | | IPvX H1->* IpvX H2->* IPxX H3->* IpvX H4->* +--+--+ +--+--+ +--+--+ +--+--+ | H1 | | H2 | | H3 | | H4 | +-----+ +-----+ +--+--+ +--+--+ Legend: --+---+---+-- = Ethernet, Token Ring, or FDDI H = Host computer MR = Master Router BR = Backup Router * = IPvX Address, X is 4 everywhere in IPv4 case X is 6 everywhere in IPv6 case (IPvX) = default router for hosts
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