Re: Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-sanchez-webdav-current-principal-00

Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de> Wed, 14 May 2008 14:13 UTC

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Wilfredo Sánchez Vega wrote:
> 
>   Cyrus and I have submitted a draft for a property that lets a client 
> determine which principal the server thinks the client is using in a 
> request.
 > ...

Looks good so far.

Nit:

  "Definition:

       <!ELEMENT current-user-principal-resource (DAV:unauthenticated |
                                                  DAV:href)>
       DAV:href value: a URL to a principal resource" -- 
<http://www3.tools.ietf.org/html/draft-sanchez-webdav-current-principal-00#section-3>

Not sure why you use the DAV: prefix for the child elements here, this 
seems to be inconsistent.

I'd also recommend making the DTD fragments valid, for example:


       <!ELEMENT current-user-principal-resource (unauthenticated |
                                                  href)>
       <!-- href value: a URL of a principal resource -->


BR, Julian