[Wpack] Adam Roach's No Objection on charter-ietf-wpack-00-04: (with COMMENT)

[Adam Roach via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
charter-ietf-wpack-00-04: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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No objection to external review, but I think there are some issues we need to
see addressed prior to approval.


> * A low likelihood that the new format increases centralization or power
> imbalances on the web.

I'm glad to see this in the charter. I would really like to see this bullet
point expanded to more clearly cover the three different categories of
specific concerns described in section 4.1 of draft-iab-escape-report (or,
alternately, cite that document for further detail).

> Note that consensus is required both for changes to the current protocol
> mechanisms and retention of current mechanisms

I think this presumes a bit too much. Although the adoption of the initial
candidate documents may be highly likely, this text clearly implies that
their adoption is a fait accompli.

> In particular, because
> something is in the initial document set (consisting of
> draft-yasskin-wpack-use-cases, draft-yasskin-wpack-bundled-exchanges, and
> draft-yasskin-http-origin-signed-responses)

I also think we really need clearly-defined milestones here. Particularly,
seeing draft-yasskin-wpack-use-cases in the list of candidate documents,
I believe we need to clearly indicate whether the WG intends to publish
a use case document, especially in the context of the IESG statement at
https://ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/support-documents/
If the intention *is* to publish the document, indicating that such
is the case (and why) will help during IESG review of such a document.