[xml2rfc-dev] Please help review v3 file: draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15

[Sandy Ginoza <[e-mail]>]

Hi again,

Continuing with our request to review XMLv3 files, we’d appreciate your input regarding draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15.  We’re hoping some of you will take the time to review the files and provide feedback regarding whether the updates are as expected and the XMLv3 files are considered “good” v3 files.  

NOTE: We are aware there is an issue w/ sectionFormat (e.g., it causes text to disappear in Section 4.3.2 of this document). This issue has been reported.

A couple of other notes:
- we focused on format only; we did not make editorial updates. 
- the diff files compare the initial v2v3 output with the files we edited.

Please review the following files related to draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15: 

https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.html>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.pdf <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.pdf>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.txt <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.txt>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.xml <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3.xml>

Diff files:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-xmldiff.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-xmldiff.html>
https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html <https://www.rfc-editor.org/v3test/draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-15-RE.v2v3-htmlwdiff.html>


Thanks,
Sandy