Re: [xmpp] I-D Action: draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-04.txt

[Philipp Hancke <[e-mail]>]

Am 21.10.2013 01:02, schrieb [e-mail]:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol Working Group of the IETF.
>
> 	Title           : Domain Name Associations (DNA) in the Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol (XMPP)
> 	Author(s)       : Peter Saint-Andre
>                            Matthew Miller
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-xmpp-dna-04.txt
> 	Pages           : 16
> 	Date            : 2013-10-20
>
> Abstract:
>     This document improves the security of the Extensible Messaging and
>     Presence Protocol (XMPP) in two ways.  First, it specifies how
>     "prooftypes" can establish a strong association between a domain name
>     and an XML stream.  Second, it describes how to securely delegate a
>     source domain to a derived domain, which is especially important in
>     virtual hosting environments.

Just noticed that none of the terminology defined in section 2 is 
actually used. I think the reference to XEP-0238 can therefore be removed.

I do suspect the figure showing the overall process can be simplified as 
proposed in 
https://github.com/fippo/xmpp-fed/commit/913a183a5a74ea7b03a1b8a67164bb35df9e0c9b 
but it has been long enough since that commit that I need to recheck this.

More thorough review to follow.