Re: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-01

Varun Singh <vsingh.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 19 May 2016 00:50 UTC

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Subject: Re: [xrblock] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-xrblock-independent-burst-gap-discard-01
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Hi Alissa,

Thank you for the review. My comments are inline.

On Tue, May 17, 2016 at 8:26 PM, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. Overall it
> looks good. I have just one question I’d like to discuss before issuing the
> LC.
>
> Both RFC 6958 and RFC 7002 mention security considerations that are not
> mentioned in this document. But it seems like similar considerations apply
> to this block. Why are these not discussed in Section 7?
>

I believe this might have been carried through from RFC7003, which has
the same text.

However, adding the considerations from RFC6958 + RFC7003 is more
appropriate here.
I will send a proposal before the end of next week.

> There are also a few nits that should be resolved together with any last
> call comments:
>
> = Section 2 =
>
> In retrospect it would have been nice to have all of these terms defined
> once in one document that the other documents could have referred to. Not
> sure it makes sense to change course now, although it seems you could just
> refer to the definitions in RFC 7003 rather than repeating them here.
>

Keeping the definitions here would avoid confusion of reading two
specs to implement this.
Although, I do not feel strongly about this.


Will fix the other nits.

-Varun



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