[yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-cbacc-02

Reshad Rahman via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 11 April 2021 21:15 UTC

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Subject: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-cbacc-02

Reviewer: Reshad Rahman
Review result: Almost Ready

YANG Doctor review of rev-02 by Reshad Rahman.

Comments/questions:

The document and YANG module-name have CBACC, yet the module prefix is "ambi",
is this on purpose? Intuitively, I was expecting the prefix to be "cbacc".

For presence statement, use CBACC-enabled instead of cbacc-enabled?

Is max-mss for a TCP Max Segment Size, or is this really max packet size? And
no need for jumbograms since this is for UDP?

Consider renaming max-bits-per-second to something along the lines of
max-speed. Description says kilobits (not bits).

Add "unit" statement e.g. to data-rate-window and max-bits-per-second

OOC, why so many priorities? I'm used to seeing 3 or 8 bits for priority.

Security considerations should mention the YANG data nodes.

Regards,
Reshad.

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