[yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server-03

Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com> Fri, 28 July 2017 22:14 UTC

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From: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>
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Subject: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server-03

Reviewer: Andy Bierman
Review result: Ready with Nits

Review: draft-ietf-netconf-tls-client-server-03

Modules:
 (M1) ietf-tls-client@2017-06-13.yang
 (M2) ietf-tls-common@2017-06-13.yang
 (M3) ietf-tls-server@2017-06-13.yang


YANG Usage:

 I did not find anything wrong in either module.
 pyang and yangdump-pro do not report any errors or warnings.

Comments:

C1:

(M2) identity tls-1.2

Why are there no identities defined for tls-1.0 and tls-1.1?


C2:

Sec 1.2 Tree Diagrams

Old text should be replaced with reference to
draft-ietf-netmod-yang-tree-diagrams-01

C3:

 (M1) IETF copyright says 2014; change to 2017
 (M3) IETF copyright says 2014; change to 2017

[yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of dr… Andy Bierman
Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review o… Kent Watsen
Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review o… Gary Wu (garywu)