Re: [yang-doctors] [IANA #1230532] [Errata Verified] RFC8632 (6866)

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Sat, 04 June 2022 05:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] [IANA #1230532] [Errata Verified] RFC8632 (6866)
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Hi Sabrina,

Sorry for letting this fall through the cracks.

> On May 25, 2022, at 12:09 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <iana-matrix@iana.org> wrote:
> 
> Hi Mahesh, all, 
> 
> Can you confirm that this is the correct set of actions? 
> 
> • Keep only one listing in the registry for this module, and link to the new version

Ideally we want to keep all versions of the module, each with their own revision date in the filename of the module. The revision statement inside the module should be stacked on top of the existing revision statement. As an example, the latest version of the module would have a filename of <module name>@2022-05-16.yang, and the revision statement:

>>> 
>>> revision 2022-05-16 {
>>>  description
>>>    "Updated text per RFC Errata 6866.";
>>>  reference
>>>    "RFC Errata 6866";
>>> }

stacked on top of the existing revision statement. 

The link can be to the latest version. Is there a way to find the older versions of the module?

> • Add a revision statement and change the date in the filename to the revision date

Yes, to the latest version of the module, keeping the older versions as is.

> • List the errata report as an additional reference (this is standard IANA practice)

Ok.

> 
> Should we remove the original YANG module file from the repository?

No. We should retain the older/original version of the module with its own date in the filename.

Thanks 

> 
> Thanks,
> Sabrina
> 
>> On Thu May 19 19:11:17 2022, mjethanandani@gmail.com wrote:
>> Hi Sabrina,
>> 
>> The revision statement works for me. Thanks.
>> 
>>> On May 16, 2022, at 12:11 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <iana-
>>> matrix@iana.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Mahesh,
>>> 
>>> Thank you for your reply. We can update the file to reflect the
>>> change in the errata.
>>> Would the following revision statement be appropriate, or do you have
>>> other suggestions?
>>> 
>>> revision 2022-05-16 {
>>>  description
>>>    "Updated text per RFC Errata 6866.";
>>>  reference
>>>    "RFC Errata 6866";
>>> }
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> 
>>> Sabrina Tanamal
>>> Lead IANA Services Specialist
>>> 
>>> On Thu May 12 01:06:01 2022, mjethanandani@gmail.com wrote:
>>>> Hi Sabrina,
>>>> 
>>>> Updating the file would be nice, although not necessary, as it
>>>> affects
>>>> readability but not the functionality of the module.
>>>> 
>>>> Cheers.
>>>> 
>>>>> On May 11, 2022, at 3:42 PM, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <iana-matrix-
>>>>> comment@iana.org> wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Hi John and YANG Doctors,
>>>>> 
>>>>> We have a question about this errata report. Since this affects the
>>>>> ietf-alarms YANG module, do we need to update the file to reflect
>>>>> the
>>>>> change listed below, or would listing this errata report as an
>>>>> additional reference for the registration be enough?
>>>>> 
>>>>> The registry is here:
>>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/yang-parameters
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thanks,
>>>>> 
>>>>> Sabrina Tanamal
>>>>> Lead IANA Services Specialist
>>>>> 
>>>>> On Tue May 10 15:58:24 2022, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>>> The following errata report has been verified for RFC8632,
>>>>>> "A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management".
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6866
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> Status: Verified
>>>>>> Type: Technical
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Reported by: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>
>>>>>> Date Reported: 2022-03-04
>>>>>> Verified by: John Scudder (IESG)
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Section: 6
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Original Text
>>>>>> -------------
>>>>>> container older-than {
>>>>>> presence "Age specification";
>>>>>> description
>>>>>>  "Matches the 'last-status-change' leaf in the alarm.";
>>>>>> choice age-spec {
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Corrected Text
>>>>>> --------------
>>>>>> container older-than {
>>>>>> presence "Age specification";
>>>>>> description
>>>>>>  "Matches the 'last-changed' leaf in the alarm.";
>>>>>> choice age-spec {
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> Notes
>>>>>> -----
>>>>>> There is no last-status-change leaf in alarm (and it seems there
>>>>>> never
>>>>>> was).
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> See also
>>>>>> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ccamp/wmCgk0DQq0lG6S_e59W-
>>>>>> MKW8EOQ/
>>>>>> 
>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> RFC8632 (draft-ietf-ccamp-alarm-module-09)
>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> Title               : A YANG Data Model for Alarm Management
>>>>>> Publication Date    : September 2019
>>>>>> Author(s)           : S. Vallin, M. Bjorklund
>>>>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>>>>> Source              : Common Control and Measurement Plane
>>>>>> Area                : Routing
>>>>>> Stream              : IETF
>>>>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>>> 
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>>>> 
>>>> Mahesh Jethanandani
>>>> mjethanandani@gmail.com
>>> 
>> 
>> 
>> Mahesh Jethanandani
>> mjethanandani@gmail.com
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