Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-04

Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanandani@gmail.com> Mon, 09 April 2018 18:49 UTC

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Cc: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>, Reshad Rehman <rrahman@cisco.com>, yang-doctors@ietf.org, draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis.all@ietf.org, netconf@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-netconf-rfc7895bis-04
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Martin,

In the YANG doctor’s review the following had been agreed upon, but the change has not been reflected in the latest version of the draft. I am going to go ahead with sending the draft for publication, but at the next opportunity, could you update the model with the change.

Thanks.

> On Feb 22, 2018, at 12:37 AM, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>; wrote:
> 
>>> 
>>> - grouping implementation-parameters should be renamed
>>> module-implementation-parameters?
>> 
>> This name change may make sense.
> 
> I agree.

Mahesh Jethanandani
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