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Re: [6lo] Mirja Kühlewind's Discuss on draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery-13: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Mirja Kuehlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>
CC: "6lo-chairs@ietf.org" <6lo-chairs@ietf.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "6lo@ietf.org" <6lo@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery@ietf.org>, Carles Gomez <carlesgo@entel.upc.edu>, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
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Hello Again Mirja : )


> Thanks for this additional text. I just cleared my discuss.
Very cool; again and again, many thanks for your deep reviews.

> 
> A couple of nits you/Suresh maybe want to add as RFC editor note:


Happy to republish:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6lo-fragment-recovery-21 

> 
> OLD
> Note that the action upon detecting a congestion only applies till the end of
> the datagram 
> NEW Note that the action upon detecting congestion only
> applies till the end of the datagram.
> MAYBE EVEN
> Note that any action that has been performed upon detection of congestion
> only applies for the transmission of one datagram

Picked the latter

> 
> OLD
> an inter-frame gap can be as a flow control or a congestion control measure
> NEW The inter-frame gap can be used as a flow control or a congestion
> control measure

done

> OLD
> a conservative Window_Size of, say, 3, will be the gating factor that starves
> the sender 
> MAYBE a conservative Window_Size of, say, 3, will be the gating
> factor that limits the transmission rate of the sender
> 


Again and again, many thanks;
all the best with the IAB,

Pascal

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