Re: [6tisch] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-17: (with COMMENT)

Tengfei Chang <tengfei.chang@inria.fr> Sat, 12 September 2020 18:51 UTC

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Thanks Erik for the review!

I will fix those comments and publish a new version soon.

Tengfei

Dr. Tengfei Chang 
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Wireless Networking for Evolving & Adaptive Applications (EVA) 
National Inst. for Research in Comp. Sci. and Automation ( Inria ) 
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> Subject: Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-17: (with COMMENT)

> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
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> COMMENT:
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> 
> [[ nits ]]
> 
> [ section 2 ]
> 
> * "to do at each time slots" -> "to do at each time slot"
> 
> * "there is a frame to sent" -> "there is a frame to be sent"
> 
> [ section 4.3 ]
> 
> * "the pledge continue listening" -> "the pledge continues listening"
> 
> [ section 4.4 ]
> 
> * "After selected a JP" ->
>  "After selecting a JP" or "After having selected a JP"
> 
> [ section 4.8 ]
> 
> * "AutRxCell" -> "AutoRxCell"?
> 
> * "for new pledge" -> "for new pledges"?
> 
> [ section 5.1 ]
> 
> * "used to both type of" -> "used for both type of"?
> 
> [ section 8 ]
> 
> * "consequence of randomly cell selection" ->
>  "consequence of random cell selection"?
> 
> [ section 9 ]
> 
> * "define din" -> "defined in"
> 
> [ section 16 ]
> 
> * "considrations" -> "considerations"
> 
> * "to hand that packet" -> "to handle that packet", maybe

All accepted!