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Re: [6tisch] WGLC for https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-17.txt

"Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com> Thu, 06 December 2018 14:47 UTC

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From: "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@cisco.com>
To: Yasuyuki Tanaka <yasuyuki.tanaka@inria.fr>
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Hello Yatch:

I'm still fixing the text from the WGLC comments so I'm happy to still pick some. Please let me know if you intend to provide a review soon.
To your point: this is an architecture document. I'm not too anxious that all the components are not fully implemented yet.
Maybe we'll work on them in PAW ML. Did you register?

Take care,

Pascal

> -----Original Message-----
> From: 6tisch <6tisch-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Yasuyuki Tanaka
> Sent: jeudi 6 décembre 2018 14:48
> To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
> Cc: 6tisch@ietf.org; Yasuyuki Tanaka <yasuyuki.tanaka@inria.fr>
> Subject: Re: [6tisch] WGLC for https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-6tisch-
> architecture-17.txt
> 
> Hi Pascal,
> 
> I'm reviewing the architecture draft, although the deadline has already
> passed... I have one comment.
> 
> I see some ideas which don't have concrete protocol specifications discussed as
> WG drafts, for instance, centralized reservation and tracks. They look like kind
> of "concepts" at this moment.
> 
> Can we keep them in the architecture draft whose intended status is now
> Standards Track? I read RFC7127, "Characterization of Proposed Standards",
> but, I'm not sure...
> 
> This should have been raised when you asked by
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6tisch/qxeFuhVNGV5wXjgz1yHY8Mp8e1I
> 
> Sorry for the late comment.
> 
> Best,
> Yatch
> 
> 
> > On Nov 11, 2018, at 3:22, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Dear WG :
> >
> >
> >
> > We are now starting the working group last call for the 6TiSCH Architecture
> based on https://www.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-6tisch-architecture-17.txt. This
> document is the merge of the previous architecture and terminology
> documents.
> >
> >
> >
> > Authors of our WIP WG docs draft-ietf-6tisch-dtsecurity-zerotouch-join-03,
> draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-00, draft-ietf-6tisch-minimal-
> security-08 and draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-01 are requested to pay particular
> attention on how their work is reflected in the Architecture, and are strongly
> encouraged to propose new text to improve the correctness of that
> representation.
> >
> >
> >
> > The architecture is a foundational product of the WG, providing the view on
> the whole stack that we designed, implemented and interop tested over the 5
> years of activity of the group; it is in some form a testimony of the WG.
> >
> > With this in mind, please pay a very special attention when reviewing it.
> >
> >
> >
> > The WGLC ends on Friday November 30th, 2018.
> >
> >
> >
> > Many thanks in advance;
> >
> >
> >
> > The chairs.
> >
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