Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: (with COMMENT)
Tengfei Chang <tengfei.chang@inria.fr> Wed, 13 May 2020 09:27 UTC
Return-Path: <tengfei.chang@inria.fr>
X-Original-To: 6tisch@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: 6tisch@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 640D73A0D5A; Wed, 13 May 2020 02:27:26 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.896
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.896 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H4=0.001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_WL=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, URIBL_BLOCKED=0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id R2dfqzpnTdYQ; Wed, 13 May 2020 02:27:21 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mail2-relais-roc.national.inria.fr (mail2-relais-roc.national.inria.fr [192.134.164.83]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id ED6D63A0D1C; Wed, 13 May 2020 02:27:19 -0700 (PDT)
X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.73,387,1583190000"; d="jpg'145?scan'145,208,145,217";a="449467635"
X-MGA-submission: MDHgVG8tLO/tpIOqxPLQR6l1so1/uMtl9qOdzHwfhIFyzjnPJywUg50VBf1RVuckV0lG05RiX0LwId3X/Wp9dAhD2f4VMsCVu65U6kZxKBgKgoH/RuPrebsI1uziDUksVLhrUWsDJROMxusHGboOz9mDkYOorJPeCjbKtNWV5SOIJw==
Received: from zcs-store3.inria.fr ([128.93.142.30]) by mail2-relais-roc.national.inria.fr with ESMTP; 13 May 2020 11:27:04 +0200
Date: Wed, 13 May 2020 11:27:04 +0200
From: Tengfei Chang <tengfei.chang@inria.fr>
To: "Pascal Thubert, pthubert" <pthubert@cisco.com>
Cc: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, tengfei chang <tengfei.chang@gmail.com>, iesg <iesg@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-6tisch-msf <draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org>, 6tisch <6tisch@ietf.org>, 6tisch-chairs <6tisch-chairs@ietf.org>
Message-ID: <356117049.2304633.1589362024872.JavaMail.zimbra@inria.fr>
In-Reply-To: <893DF4D7-603B-4281-9A40-D3340A4325CA@cisco.com>
References: <158588511619.26351.4149213511250395502@ietfa.amsl.com> <CAAdgstQ8QfXg5TtL30vqL38C=Ey8Qaa0RT2Gzd_at1pBhQOaeA@mail.gmail.com> <MN2PR11MB35651B029F7998BC4EE7CDBBD8A10@MN2PR11MB3565.namprd11.prod.outlook.com> <350915165.1841546.1589209223906.JavaMail.zimbra@inria.fr> <MN2PR11MB3565AD8A8F85BD204C7D6B45D8A10@MN2PR11MB3565.namprd11.prod.outlook.com> <1029635691.2295344.1589360582240.JavaMail.zimbra@inria.fr> <893DF4D7-603B-4281-9A40-D3340A4325CA@cisco.com>
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="=_78162367-2872-4524-9ef4-e6d8ef3a047a"
X-Originating-IP: [77.57.206.159]
X-Mailer: Zimbra 8.7.11_GA_3800 (ZimbraWebClient - GC81 (Win)/8.7.11_GA_3800)
Thread-Topic: Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: (with COMMENT)
Thread-Index: AQHWJ4ybnh6Qi3kpc0am7qSSZwMhPqii39AQ8SgemAmO2A4YUDT/wawQ/lqyXCA2Nu7T/g==
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/6tisch/bkUyNEV7a6F91kQI2i1hUosjID0>
Subject: Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: (with COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: 6tisch@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29
Precedence: list
List-Id: "Discuss link layer model for Deterministic IPv6 over the TSCH mode of IEEE 802.15.4e, and impacts on RPL and 6LoWPAN such as resource allocation" <6tisch.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/6tisch>, <mailto:6tisch-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/6tisch/>
List-Post: <mailto:6tisch@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:6tisch-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch>, <mailto:6tisch-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 13 May 2020 09:27:27 -0000
Alright, then I will keep the version 17 unpublished, until it's needed. Thanks a lot Pascal! Tengfei Stay Healthy! Stay Optimistic! Dr. Tengfei Chang Post-doctoral Researcher Wireless Networking for Evolving & Adaptive Applications (EVA) National Inst. for Research in Comp. Sci. and Automation ( Inria ) (+33)1 80 49 41 43 tengfei.chang@inria.fr www.tchang.org ____________________ > From: "Pascal Thubert, pthubert" <pthubert@cisco.com> > To: "Tengfei Chang" <tengfei.chang@inria.fr> > Cc: "Benjamin Kaduk" <kaduk@mit.edu>, "tengfei chang" <tengfei.chang@gmail.com>, > "iesg" <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-6tisch-msf" > <draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org>, "6tisch" <6tisch@ietf.org>, "6tisch-chairs" > <6tisch-chairs@ietf.org> > Sent: Wednesday, May 13, 2020 11:08:03 AM > Subject: Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: > (with COMMENT) > Oh that’s cool then we can keep a note for the rfc editor no need for > republishing > I’ll ping Alvaro see if the doc can be queued now. > Take care, > Pascal >> Le 13 mai 2020 à 11:03, Tengfei Chang <tengfei.chang@inria.fr> a écrit : >> Hi Pascal, >> It turns out I missed read Benjamin's suggestion: >> Benjiamin suggested: >> I suggest '''one routing parent; this parent is referred to as the >> "selected parent"'''. >> I miss read it as the suggestion is to replace "one routing parent" by "the >> selected parent", which I changed it to the "selected routing parent". >> Will correct it and publish a new version. >> Thanks for the catching! >> Tengfei >> Stay Healthy! Stay Optimistic! >> Dr. Tengfei Chang >> Post-doctoral Researcher >> Wireless Networking for Evolving & Adaptive Applications (EVA) >> National Inst. for Research in Comp. Sci. and Automation ( Inria ) >> (+33)1 80 49 41 43 >> tengfei.chang@inria.fr >> www.tchang.org >> ____________________ >> <inria.jpg> >>> From: "Pascal Thubert, pthubert" <pthubert@cisco.com> >>> To: "Tengfei Chang" <tengfei.chang@inria.fr>, "Benjamin Kaduk" <kaduk@mit.edu> >>> Cc: "tengfei chang" <tengfei.chang@gmail.com>, "iesg" <iesg@ietf.org>, >>> "draft-ietf-6tisch-msf" <draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org>, "6tisch" >>> <6tisch@ietf.org>, "6tisch-chairs" <6tisch-chairs@ietf.org> >>> Sent: Monday, May 11, 2020 6:08:50 PM >>> Subject: RE: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: >>> (with COMMENT) >>> Hello Benjamin and Tengfei; >>> What I did is pick one randomly, and picked this; >>> “ >>> MSF works closely with RPL, specifically the routing parent defined >>> in [RFC6550]. This specification only describes how MSF works with >>> one routing parent, which is phrased as "selected parent". The >>> nit: I suggest '''one routing parent; this parent is referred to as the >>> "selected parent"'''. >>> “ >>> Then I looked at 16 and the text is still >>> MSF works closely with the IPv6 Routing Protocol for Low-Power and >>> Lossy Networks (RPL), specifically the routing parent defined in >>> [ [ https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6550 | RFC6550 ] ]. This specification only >>> describes how MSF works with the >>> selected routing parent, which is phrased as "selected parent". The >>> activity of MSF towards the single routing parent is called a "MSF >>> session". Though the performance of MSF is evaluated only when the >>> "selected parent" represents the node's preferred parent, there >>> This tells me that the handling of Benjamin’s review is not complete, so I asked >>> Tengfei to double check. >>> Take care; >>> Pascal >>> From: Tengfei Chang <tengfei.chang@inria.fr> >>> Sent: lundi 11 mai 2020 17:00 >>> To: Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <pthubert@cisco.com> >>> Cc: tengfei chang <tengfei.chang@gmail.com>; Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>; >>> iesg <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-6tisch-msf <draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org>; >>> 6tisch <6tisch@ietf.org>; 6tisch-chairs <6tisch-chairs@ietf.org> >>> Subject: Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: >>> (with COMMENT) >>> Hi Pascal, >>> If comparing the comments to draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-12 from another thread >>> previously, you will find out they are actually the same. >>> Those comments are indeed fixed with the MSF versions after 12, including >>> draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16 . >>> Regards, >>> Tengfei >>> Stay Healthy! Stay Optimistic! >>> Dr. Tengfei Chang >>> Post-doctoral Researcher >>> Wireless Networking for Evolving & Adaptive Applications (EVA) >>> National Inst. for Research in Comp. Sci. and Automation ( Inria ) >>> (+33)1 80 49 41 43 >>> [ mailto:tengfei.chang@inria.fr | tengfei.chang@inria.fr ] >>> [ http://www.tchang.org/ | www.tchang.org ] >>> ____________________ >>> <image001.jpg> >>>> From: "Pascal Thubert, pthubert" < [ mailto:pthubert@cisco.com | >>>> pthubert@cisco.com ] > >>>> To: "tengfei chang" < [ mailto:tengfei.chang@gmail.com | tengfei.chang@gmail.com >>>> ] >, "Benjamin Kaduk" < [ mailto:kaduk@mit.edu | kaduk@mit.edu ] > >>>> Cc: "iesg" < [ mailto:iesg@ietf.org | iesg@ietf.org ] >, "draft-ietf-6tisch-msf" >>>> < [ mailto:draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org | draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org ] >, >>>> "6tisch" < [ mailto:6tisch@ietf.org | 6tisch@ietf.org ] >, "6tisch-chairs" < [ >>>> mailto:6tisch-chairs@ietf.org | 6tisch-chairs@ietf.org ] > >>>> Sent: Monday, May 11, 2020 4:23:12 PM >>>> Subject: RE: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: >>>> (with COMMENT) >>>> Hello Tengfei >>>> My reading is that the comments below apply to version 16 as the title >>>> indicates. >>>> I randomly checked the proposed nit fixes and the issues are effectively still >>>> left to be fixed. >>>> Can you please have a look? >>>> Take care, >>>> Pascal >>>> From: Tengfei Chang < [ mailto:tengfei.chang@gmail.com | tengfei.chang@gmail.com >>>> ] > >>>> Sent: lundi 11 mai 2020 14:06 >>>> To: Benjamin Kaduk < [ mailto:kaduk@mit.edu | kaduk@mit.edu ] > >>>> Cc: The IESG < [ mailto:iesg@ietf.org | iesg@ietf.org ] >; [ >>>> mailto:draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org | draft-ietf-6tisch-msf@ietf.org ] ; >>>> 6tisch < [ mailto:6tisch@ietf.org | 6tisch@ietf.org ] >; [ >>>> mailto:6tisch-chairs@ietf.org | 6tisch-chairs@ietf.org ] ; Pascal Thubert >>>> (pthubert) < [ mailto:pthubert@cisco.com | pthubert@cisco.com ] > >>>> Subject: Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: >>>> (with COMMENT) >>>> Hi Benjamin, >>>> Thanks for updating the comments! >>>> I believe the change from the current email comparing to previous one is that >>>> the DISCUSSION part is removed as we fixed it in another previous thread. >>>> The other comments from the current email are actually for old version of MSF, >>>> which are all resolved in the latest version MSF-16. >>>> For the administration, >>>> I want to clarify that the draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16 has resolved all comments >>>> which were discussed. >>>> Please advise me if there is any further action required. Thanks a lot! >>>> Regards, >>>> Tengfei >>>> On Fri, Apr 3, 2020 at 5:38 AM Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker < [ >>>> mailto:noreply@ietf.org | noreply@ietf.org ] > wrote: >>>>> Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for >>>>> draft-ietf-6tisch-msf-16: No Objection >>>>> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all >>>>> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this >>>>> introductory paragraph, however.) >>>>> Please refer to [ https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html | >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html ] >>>>> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. >>>>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >>>>> [ https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-msf/ | >>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6tisch-msf/ ] >>>>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >>>>> COMMENT: >>>>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >>>>> Thanks for clarifying the non-issue nature of my original Discuss points! >>>>> Original COMMENT section preserved below (possibly stale). >>>>> I support Roman's Discuss -- we need more information for this to be a >>>>> useful reference; even what seem to be the official DASFAA 1997 >>>>> proceedings ( [ https://dblp.org/db/conf/dasfaa/dasfaa97 | >>>>> https://dblp.org/db/conf/dasfaa/dasfaa97 ] ) do not have an >>>>> associated document). >>>>> Basing various scheduling aspects on (a hash of) the EUI64 ties >>>>> functionality to a persistent identifier for a device. How significant >>>>> a disruption would be incurred if a device periodically changes its >>>>> presented EUI64 for anonymization purposes? >>>>> There seems to be a general pattern of "if you don't have a >>>>> 6P-negotiated Tx cell, install and AutoTxCell to send your one message >>>>> and then remove it after sending"; I wonder if it would be easier on the >>>>> reader to consolidate this as a general principle and not repeat the >>>>> details every time it occurs. >>>>> Requirements Language >>>>> "NOT RECOMMENDED" is not in the RFC2119 boilerplate (but is a BCP 14 keyword). >>>>> Section 1 >>>>> the 6 steps described in Section 4. The end state of the join >>>>> process is that the node is synchronized to the network, has mutually >>>>> authenticated to the network, has identified a routing parent, and >>>>> nit(?): I guess maybe "mutually authenticated with" is more correct for >>>>> the bidirectional operation. >>>>> It does so for 3 reasons: to match the link-layer resources to the >>>>> traffic, to handle changing parent, to handle a schedule collision. >>>>> nit: end the list with "or" (or "and"?). >>>>> MSF works closely with RPL, specifically the routing parent defined >>>>> in [RFC6550]. This specification only describes how MSF works with >>>>> one routing parent, which is phrased as "selected parent". The >>>>> nit: I suggest '''one routing parent; this parent is referred to as the >>>>> "selected parent"'''. >>>>> activity of MSF towards to single routing parent is called as a "MSF >>>>> nit: "towards the" >>>>> * We added sections on the interface to the minimal 6TiSCH >>>>> configuration (Section 2), the use of the SIGNAL command >>>>> (Section 6), the MSF constants (Section 14), the MSF statistics >>>>> (Section 15). >>>>> nit: end the list with "and". >>>>> Section 2 >>>>> In a TSCH network, time is sliced up into time slots. The time slots >>>>> are grouped as one of more slotframes which repeat over time. The >>>>> nit(?): should this be "one or more"? >>>>> channel) is indicated as a cell of TSCH schedule. MSF is one of the >>>>> policies defining how to manage the TSCH schedule. >>>>> nit: if there is only one such policy active at a given time for a given >>>>> network, I suggest "MSF is a policy for managing the TCSH schedule". >>>>> (If multiple policies are active simultaneously, no change is needed.) >>>>> MSF uses the minimal cell for broadcast frames such as Enhanced >>>>> Beacons (EBs) [IEEE802154] and broadcast DODAG Information Objects >>>>> (DIOs) [RFC6550]. Cells scheduled by MSF are meant to be used only >>>>> for unicast frames. >>>>> If this paragraph was moved before the previous paragraph, then EB and >>>>> DIO would be defined before their first usage. >>>>> bandwidth of minimal cell. One of the algorithm met the rule is the >>>>> Trickle timer defined in [RFC6206] which is applied on DIO messages >>>>> [RFC6550]. However, any such algorithm of limiting the broadcast >>>>> nit(?): "One of the algorithms that fulfills this requirement"? >>>>> MSF RECOMMENDS the use of 3 slotframes. MSF schedules autonomous >>>>> cells at Slotframe 1 (Section 3) and 6P negotiated cells at Slotframe >>>>> 2 (Section 5) , while Slotframe 0 is used for the bootstrap traffic >>>>> as defined in the Minimal 6TiSCH Configuration. It is RECOMMENDED to >>>>> use the same slotframe length for Slotframe 0, 1 and 2. Thus it is >>>>> Perhaps this is just a question of writing style, but if an >>>>> implementation is free to use an alternative SF or a variant of MSF, >>>>> could we not say that "MSF uses 3 slotframts", "MSF uses the same >>>>> slotframe length for", etc.? >>>>> Section 3 >>>>> Is there any risk of unwanted correlation between slot and channel >>>>> offsets when using the same hash function and input for both >>>>> calculations? >>>>> hash function. Other optional parameters defined in SAX determine >>>>> the performance of SAX hash function. Those parameters could be >>>>> broadcasted in EB frame or pre-configured. For interoperability >>>>> purposes, an example how the hash function is implemented is detailed >>>>> in Appendix B. >>>>> Given the lack of usable reference for [SAX-DASFAA], I assume that the >>>>> content in Appendix B is going to be used as a specification, not just >>>>> an example. >>>>> * The AutoRxCell MUST always remain scheduled after synchronized. >>>>> nit: s/synchronized/synchronization/ >>>>> AutoRxCell. In case of conflicting with a negotiated cell, >>>>> autonomous cells take precedence over negotiated cell, which is >>>>> stated in [IEEE802154]. However, when the Slotframe 0, 1 and 2 use >>>>> the same length value, it is possible for negotiated cell to avoid >>>>> the collision with AutoRxCell. >>>>> Presumably this factors in to the recommendation to have the three >>>>> listed slotframes use the same length, but mentioning it explicitly >>>>> (whether here or where the recommendation is made) might be nice. >>>>> Section 4 >>>>> network. Alternative behaviors may involved, for example, when >>>>> alternative security solution is used for the network. Section 4.1 >>>>> nit: singular/plural mismatch "behaviors"/"solution is used" >>>>> Section 4.1 >>>>> A node implementing MSF SHOULD implement the Minimal Security >>>>> Framework for 6TiSCH [I-D.ietf-6tisch-minimal-security]. As a >>>>> Didn't this get renamed to CoJP? >>>>> Section 4.2 >>>>> I a little bit wonder if there is a better description than "available >>>>> frequencies" but don't have one to offer. >>>>> Section 4.3 >>>>> While the exact behavior is implementation-specific, it is >>>>> RECOMMENDED that after having received the first EB, a node keeps >>>>> listen for at most MAX_EB_DELAY seconds until it has received EBs >>>>> from NUM_NEIGHBOURS_TO_WAIT distinct neighbors, which is defined in >>>>> [RFC8180]. >>>>> nit(?): this phrasing implies that only NUM_NEIGHBOURS_TO_WAIT is >>>>> defined in RFC 8180, but MAX_EB_DELAY is also defined there. >>>>> not-nit: this phrasing is ambiguous as to whether one of MAX_EB_DELAY >>>>> and NUM_NEIGHBOURS_TO_WAIT is sufficient to move to the next step or >>>>> whether both are required. >>>>> Section 4.4 >>>>> After selected a JP, a node generates a Join Request and installs an >>>>> AutoTxCell to the JP. The Join Request is then sent by the pledge to >>>>> its JP over the AutoTxCell. The AutoTxCell is removed by the pledge >>>>> editorial: I'd suggest s/its JP/its selected JP/ >>>>> Response is sent out. The pledge receives the Join Response from its >>>>> AutoRxCell, thereby learns the keying material used in the network, >>>>> as well as other configurations, and becomes a "joined node". >>>>> nit: maybe "other configuration values" or "other configuration >>>>> settings"? >>>>> Section 4.6 >>>>> Once it has selected a routing parent, the joined node MUST generate >>>>> a 6P ADD Request and install an AutoTxCell to that parent. The 6P >>>>> ADD Request is sent out through the AutoTxCell with the following >>>>> fields: >>>>> * CellOptions: set to TX=1,RX=0,SHARED=0 >>>>> * NumCells: set to 1 >>>>> * CellList: at least 5 cells, chosen according to Section 8 >>>>> Is this listing describing the contents of the ADD request or the >>>>> AuthTxCell used to send it? (I presume the former, in which case I >>>>> suggest to use "containing" or similar in preference to "with".) >>>>> Section 5.1 >>>>> The goal of MSF is to manage the communication schedule in the 6TiSCH >>>>> schedule in a distributed manner. For a node, this translates into >>>>> monitoring the current usage of the cells it has to the selected >>>>> parent: >>>>> Is this goal strictly limited to traffic "to the selected parent" vs. >>>>> all traffic? >>>>> * If the node determines that the number of link-layer frames it is >>>>> attempting to exchange with the selected parent per unit of time >>>>> is larger than the capacity offered by the TSCH negotiated cells >>>>> it has scheduled with it, the node issues a 6P ADD command to that >>>>> parent to add cells to the TSCH schedule. >>>>> * If the traffic is lower than the capacity, the node issues a 6P >>>>> DELETE command to that parent to delete cells from the TSCH >>>>> schedule. >>>>> As written, this would potentially lead to oscillation when demand is >>>>> basically at capacity, due to the quantization of capacity. Perhaps >>>>> some provisioning for hysteresis is appropriate? >>>>> The cell option of cells listed in CellList in 6P Request frame >>>>> SHOULD be either Tx=1 only or Rx=1 only. Both NumCellsElapsed and >>>>> NumCellsUsed counters can be used to both type of negotiated cells. >>>>> Would this be more clear as "(Tx=1,Rx=0) or (Tx=0,Rx=1)"? >>>>> * NumCellsElapsed is incremented by exactly 1 when the current cell >>>>> is AutoRxCell. >>>>> This holds for all peers/parents we're keeping counters for, so the >>>>> AutoRxCell can get "double counted"? >>>>> In case that a node booted or disappeared from the network, the cell >>>>> reserved at the selected parent may be kept in the schedule forever. >>>>> A clean-up mechanism MUST be provided to resolve this issue. The >>>>> clean-up mechanism is implementation-specific. It could either be a >>>>> periodic polling to the neighbors the nodes have negotiated cells >>>>> with, or monitoring the activities on those cells. The goal is to >>>>> confirm those negotiated cells are not used anymore by the associated >>>>> neighbors and remove them from the schedule. >>>>> I'm not sure that "monitoring the activities on those cells" is safe >>>>> with the current level of specification; if a node negotiates a 6P >>>>> transmit cell to a parent and uses it only sparingly, with the parent >>>>> eventually reclaiming it due to inactivity, I don't see a mechanism by >>>>> which the node will reliably discover the negotiated cell to be >>>>> nonfunctional and fall back to (e.g.) the corresponding AutoTxCell. It >>>>> may be most prudent to just not mention that as an example (a "periodic >>>>> polling" procedure does not seem to have the same potential for >>>>> information skew) >>>>> Section 5.3 >>>>> schedule is executed and the node sends frames to that parent. When >>>>> NumTx reaches MAX_NUMTX, both NumTx and NumTxAck MUST be divided by >>>>> 2. For example, when MAX_NUMTX is set to 256, from NumTx=255 and >>>>> NumTxAck=127, the counters become NumTx=128 and NumTxAck=64 if one >>>>> frame is sent to the parent with an Acknowledgment received. This >>>>> operation does not change the value of the PDR, but allows the >>>>> counters to keep incrementing. The value of MAX_NUMTX is >>>>> implementation-specific. >>>>> Does MAX_NUMTX need to be a power of two (to avoid errors when the >>>>> division occurs)? >>>>> 4. For any other cell, it compares its PDR against that of the cell >>>>> with the highest PDR. If the difference is larger than >>>>> RELOCATE_PDRTHRES, it triggers the relocation of that cell using >>>>> a 6P RELOCATE command. >>>>> The recommended RELOCATE_PDRTHRES is given as "50 %". Is this >>>>> "difference" performed as a subtraction (so that if the highest PDR is >>>>> less than 50%, no cells can ever be relocated) or a ratio (a PDR that's >>>>> half than the maximum PDR or smaller will trigger relocation)? >>>>> Section 7 >>>>> Maybe reference Section 17.1 where the allocation will occur? >>>>> Section 8 >>>>> * The slotOffset of a cell in the CellList SHOULD be randomly and >>>>> uniformly chosen among all the slotOffset values that satisfy the >>>>> restrictions above. >>>>> * The channelOffset of a cell in the CellList SHOULD be randomly and >>>>> uniformly chosen in [0..numFrequencies], where numFrequencies >>>>> represents the number of frequencies a node can communicate on. >>>>> Do these random selections need to be independent from each other? (I >>>>> note that the selection for the autonomous cells are not.) >>>>> Section 9 >>>>> Is there a reference for these three parameters (MAXBE, MAXRETRIES, >>>>> SLOTFRAME_LENGTH)? SLOTFRAME_LENGTH seems new in this document and is >>>>> listed in the table in Section 14, but the other two are not listed >>>>> there. >>>>> Section 14 >>>>> Why is MAX_NUMTX not listed in the table? >>>>> Can we really give a recommended NUM_CH_OFFSET value, since this is in >>>>> effect dependent on the number of channels available? >>>>> KA_PERIOD is defined but not used elsewhere in the document. >>>>> What are the considerations in using a power of 10 vs. a power of 2 as >>>>> MAX_NUM_CELLS? >>>>> Section 16 >>>>> MSF defines a series of "rules" for the node to follow. It triggers >>>>> several actions, that are carried out by the protocols defined in the >>>>> following specifications: the Minimal IPv6 over the TSCH Mode of IEEE >>>>> 802.15.4e (6TiSCH) Configuration [RFC8180], the 6TiSCH Operation >>>>> I'd suggest a brief note that the security considerations of those >>>>> protocols continue to apply (even though it ought to be obvious); >>>>> reading them could help a reader understand the behavior of this >>>>> document as well. >>>>> Sublayer Protocol (6P) [RFC8480], and the Minimal Security Framework >>>>> for 6TiSCH [I-D.ietf-6tisch-minimal-security]. In particular, MSF >>>>> [CoJP again] >>>>> prevent it from receiving the join response. This situation should >>>>> be detected through the absence of a particular node from the network >>>>> and handled by the network administrator through out-of-band means, >>>>> e.g. by moving the node outside the radio range of the attacker. >>>>> "the radio range of the attacker" is not exactly a fixed constant ... >>>>> attackers are not in general bound by legal limits and can increase Tx >>>>> power subject only to their equipment and budget. >>>>> MSF adapts to traffics containing packets from IP layer. It is >>>>> possible that the IP packet has a non-zero DSCP (Diffserv Code Point >>>>> [RFC2597]) value in its IPv6 header. The decision whether to hand >>>>> RFC 2597 is talking more about specifically assured forwarding PHB groups >>>>> than "DSCP codepoint"s per se. >>>>> Section 18.1 >>>>> RFC 6206 seems to only be used as an example (Trickle), and could >>>>> probably be informative. >>>>> RFC 8505 might also not need to be normative. >>>>> Appendix B >>>>> In MSF, the T is replaced by the length slotframe 1. String s is >>>>> nit: "length of" >>>>> 2. sum the value of L_shift(h,l_bit), R_shift(h,r_bit) and ci >>>>> Is this addition performed in "infinite precision" integer arithmetic or >>>>> limited to the output width of h, e.g., by modular division? (It's not >>>>> clear to me whether this is the role T plays or not.) >>>>> 8. assign the result of Step 5 to h >>>>> The value from step 5 *is* h, so taken literally this says "assign h to >>>>> h" and is not needed. >>>>> _______________________________________________ >>>>> 6tisch mailing list >>>>> [ mailto:6tisch@ietf.org | 6tisch@ietf.org ] >>>>> [ https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch | >>>>> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/6tisch ] >>>> -- >>>> —————————————————————————————————————— >>>> Stay healthy, stay optimistic! >>>> Dr. Tengfei, Chang >>>> Postdoctoral Research Engineer , Inria >>>> [ http://www.tchang.org/ | www.tchang.org/ ] >>>> ——————————————————————————————————————
- [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-i… Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Tengfei Chang
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Tengfei Chang
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Tengfei Chang
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)
- Re: [6tisch] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on dra… Tengfei Chang