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Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 06 September 2014 02:37 UTC

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Date: Sat, 06 Sep 2014 14:31:55 +1200
From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-kyzivat-case-sensitive-abnf-01.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-30
IESG Telechat date:

Summary:   Ready with nits
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Comment:
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The writeup says this draft was discussed on the "abnf-discuss" list. When I looked,
the mail archive for abnf-discuss@ietf.org hadn't been updated since May 2012. Is there
some other list?

Nits:
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> Abstract
>
>   This document extends the base definition of ABNF (Augmented Mackus-
>   Naur Form)

s/Mackus/Backus/

> 1. Introduction
>
>   The base definition of ABNF (Augmented Mackus-Naur Form) supports
>   ASCII string literals.

s/Mackus/Backus/



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