Re: [Ace] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-17: (with COMMENT)

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-17: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Lars,

Thank you very much for the review! We have incorporated your changes in the newly submitted v-18 https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-18 , including many good changes from the GenART review from Elwyn.

Answers inline.

Thanks again,
Francesca

On 25/03/2021, 12:29, "iesg on behalf of Lars Eggert via Datatracker" <iesg-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-17: No Objection

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    COMMENT:
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    All comments below are very minor change suggestions that you may choose to
    incorporate in some way (or ignore), as you see fit. There is no need to let me
    know what you did with these suggestions.

FP: Well, letting you know anyway... :)

    Paragraph 1, nit:
    Elwyn Davies' Gen-ART review
    (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/Es7PhQvSnCixYRfEYs0RLqcLYC0/)
    contains a nits that I wanted to make sure you were aware of.

FP: Thanks, fixed.

    Section 3.2, paragraph 14, nit:
    -    the 'cnf' parameeter of the access token response.  If included, the
    -                   -
    +    the 'cnf' parameter of the access token response.  If included, the

FP: Fixed.