Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt

[Paul Wouters <[e-mail]>]

I should probably put it in Revised ID needed, as there are a few bugs left:

- the 2119 boilerplate triggers warning (although I don't see the
discrepancy)
- RFC 5280 is listed as informative reference but it is not references
anywhere in the text
- outdated reference to draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-13
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile/13/>
-  "without compromising the integrity of " be better than "without
compromising the security" (given CMP does not provide confidentiality

It seems the authors haven't gone yet through all the ballot comments at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport/ballot/

I'll put it in revised ID needed now since at least the the above bullet
points should be fixed.

Paul

On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 11:13 AM Daniel Migault <[e-mail]> wrote:

> As far as I understand it, the document is in " Approved-announcement to
> be sent::AD Followup", which means the AD needs to approve the latest
> version to be sent to the RFC editor. Th elatest version has been published
> on may 15, so my guess is that the approval should come in the next few
> days.
>
> Yours,
> Daniel
>
>
> On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 8:52 AM Brockhaus, Hendrik <
> [e-mail]> wrote:
>
>> Thanks to Mohit and Saurabh for the update also from my side.
>> Are there any further changes planned or is anything else necessary
>> before moving the draft to RFC Editor state?
>>
>> Hendrik
>>
>> > Von: Ace <[e-mail]> Im Auftrag von Daniel Migault
>> >
>> > Thanks for the submission Mohit.
>> >
>> > Yours,
>> > Daniel
>> >
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>> > Subject: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt
>> >
>> >
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Authentication
>> and
>> > Authorization for Constrained Environments (ACE) WG of the IETF.
>> >
>> >    Title           : CoAP Transfer for the Certificate Management
>> Protocol
>> >    Authors         : Mohit Sahni
>> >                      Saurabh Tripathi
>> >    Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt
>> >    Pages           : 11
>> >    Date            : 2023-05-15
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
>> >    (CoAP) as a transfer mechanism for the Certificate Management
>> >    Protocol (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI
>> >    entities for the purpose of certificate creation and management.
>> >    CoAP is an HTTP-like client-server protocol used by various
>> >    constrained devices in the IoT space.
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
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