Re: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt

Hi Paul,
I think you may be looking at the older version of the draft. (Please check
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport)

I submitted the xml version and the boilerplate is auto generated from the
xml. I am not sure how to change the boiler plate text. My guess is that
it's the xml2rfc tool that's adding the boilerplate.

The reference of 5280 is added in the below text in the version 10 of the
draft:
Section 4 bullet point 4:
An EE might not witness all of the Announcement messages when using the
CoAP Observe option [RFC7641], since the Observe option is a "best-effort"
approach and the server might lose its state for subscribers to its
announcement messages. The EEs may use an alternate method described in
section 2.6 to obtain time critical changes such as CRL [RFC5280] updates.

Reference to draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-13
<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile/13/>
has
been updated to version 21 now in the latest draft.

The comment "without compromising the integrity of " be better than
"without compromising the security" (given CMP does not provide
confidentiality" was not directed me but to the ADs (i.e. Paul) If you
agree, I can make the change to the text.

Thanks
Mohit

On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 9:07 AM Paul Wouters <paul.wouters=
40aiven.io@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> I should probably put it in Revised ID needed, as there are a few bugs
> left:
>
> - the 2119 boilerplate triggers warning (although I don't see the
> discrepancy)
> - RFC 5280 is listed as informative reference but it is not references
> anywhere in the text
> - outdated reference to draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile-13
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lamps-lightweight-cmp-profile/13/>
> -  "without compromising the integrity of " be better than "without
> compromising the security" (given CMP does not provide confidentiality
>
> It seems the authors haven't gone yet through all the ballot comments at
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport/ballot/
>
> I'll put it in revised ID needed now since at least the the above bullet
> points should be fixed.
>
> Paul
>
> On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 11:13 AM Daniel Migault <mglt.ietf@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
>> As far as I understand it, the document is in " Approved-announcement to
>> be sent::AD Followup", which means the AD needs to approve the latest
>> version to be sent to the RFC editor. Th elatest version has been published
>> on may 15, so my guess is that the approval should come in the next few
>> days.
>>
>> Yours,
>> Daniel
>>
>>
>> On Thu, May 25, 2023 at 8:52 AM Brockhaus, Hendrik <
>> hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com> wrote:
>>
>>> Thanks to Mohit and Saurabh for the update also from my side.
>>> Are there any further changes planned or is anything else necessary
>>> before moving the draft to RFC Editor state?
>>>
>>> Hendrik
>>>
>>> > Von: Ace <ace-bounces@ietf.org> Im Auftrag von Daniel Migault
>>> >
>>> > Thanks for the submission Mohit.
>>> >
>>> > Yours,
>>> > Daniel
>>> >
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>>> > Subject: [Ace] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt
>>> >
>>> >
>>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>>> > directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Authentication
>>> and
>>> > Authorization for Constrained Environments (ACE) WG of the IETF.
>>> >
>>> >    Title           : CoAP Transfer for the Certificate Management
>>> Protocol
>>> >    Authors         : Mohit Sahni
>>> >                      Saurabh Tripathi
>>> >    Filename        : draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport-10.txt
>>> >    Pages           : 11
>>> >    Date            : 2023-05-15
>>> >
>>> > Abstract:
>>> >    This document specifies the use of Constrained Application Protocol
>>> >    (CoAP) as a transfer mechanism for the Certificate Management
>>> >    Protocol (CMP).  CMP defines the interaction between various PKI
>>> >    entities for the purpose of certificate creation and management.
>>> >    CoAP is an HTTP-like client-server protocol used by various
>>> >    constrained devices in the IoT space.
>>> >
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>>
>> --
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>> Ericsson
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