Re: [Ace] [IANA #1303039] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap (core-parameters, CoAP Content-Formats)

Dear Esko,

Thank you for your comments.

Please, see responses inline.

El 12/1/24 a las 10:55, Esko Dijk escribió:
> Hello,
>
> I believe the draft would need a few updates to clarify the new media type and the precise request.
>
> * application/coap-eap is registered but never used (i.e. referred to by name) from any other section.
We will update the figures and text to show the usage of the media type.
> * I couldn't find an explicit format/syntax definition for this new media type.
> * Is it equal to the CBOR data format defined in Section 4? If so, then section 4 should mention at least the name of the new media type and section 8.5 ideally should give a quick pointer to section 4 for the format definition.
Yes, the format is the EAP packet, followed by the CoAP_Information 
elements described in Section 4. We will update the text as suggested.
> * the text in 8.6 should better refer to Section 12.3 of [RFC 7252] for the registry; link to [RFC 6690] is not so useful here.
Thank you, we will follow these suggestions.
>     The text says "Expert Review" but that's only for the 0-255 range. For this range some additional motivation is required why it needs to be there, and this is missing.
>     For the 256-9999 range the procedure is "IETF review" -> did you mean to select this range?
>
> It would be ok to continue the registration with the current draft, if the authors want to make text clarifications later on and not now.
> A number in the 256-9999 is for sure ok (if that's intended), for example 260, but for 0-255 range some reason/rationale needs to be provided.

The "256-9999" range is ok for us. We will change the text to “IETF review”.

Thank you.

Best regards.

>
> Regards
> Esko
>
>
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> Subject: [IANA #1303039] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap (core-parameters, CoAP Content-Formats)
>
> Dear Esko Dijk (cc: ace WG),
>
> As the designated expert for the CoAP Content-Formats registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09 for us? Please see:
>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap/__;!!D9dNQwwGXtA!X-2HqHkXNgi4f08VyivJJDBTCBQ2LDf3_mHRSZywqNh3FLf6SkB5RRDROAs1sw1qJ-PEFH7NcEG_EJgsmzrCHjtHZGuy$
>
> The due date is January 25.
>
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make the registration at:
>
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/__;!!D9dNQwwGXtA!X-2HqHkXNgi4f08VyivJJDBTCBQ2LDf3_mHRSZywqNh3FLf6SkB5RRDROAs1sw1qJ-PEFH7NcEG_EJgsmzrCHihUlDpD$
>
> With thanks,
>
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
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