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Dan Garcia Carrillo <garciadan@uniovi.es> Mon, 29 January 2024 09:33 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-09
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Dear Roni,

Thank you for the comments.

Please see responses inline.

El 24/1/24 a las 10:04, Roni Even via Datatracker escribió:
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-ace-wg-coap-eap-??
> Reviewer: Roni Even
> Review Date: 2024-01-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-25
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> Summary:
> The document is ready for publication as a standard track rfc with nits
>
> Major issues:
>
> Minor issues:
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
> The document defines a well known uri. Through out the document it keeps the
> name well-known but it should be replaced with the specified coap-eap by the
> authors or as a directive to the rfc editor.Could you please, clarify this a bit?

The text well-known URI is in the following places.

Do you mean we should replace where there is a reference in the text 
with "/.well-known/coap-eap" by coap-eap?

I have cross out in the list where I think it could be removed. I you 
could confirm this it would be great.

________

- Figures

- Section 3. CoAP-EAP Operation

"To access the authentication service, this document defines the 
well-known URI "/.well-known/coap-eap" (to be assigned by IANA)"

- 3.1 Discovery

The CoAP-EAP application can be accessed through the well-known URI 
"coap-eap" for the trigger message (Step 0).

-3.2 Flow of Operation

""POST /.well-known/coap-eap" request"

- 3.5.3. Duplicated message with /.well-known/coap-eap

The reception of the trigger message in Step 0 containing (I would add 
-- "the URI") /.well-known/coap-eap needs some additional 
considerations, as the resource is always available in the EAP 
authenticator.

...

If an old "POST /.well-known/coap-eap" (Step 0)...

________


>    As for the iana registration
> request rfc8615 registration procedure is specification required and not expert
> review.
>
Ok, we will update this in the text, thank you.


> There is also a missing column “state” probably should be permanent.
>
Thank you, we will change this, following the clarification from the 
well-known URI expert comment.

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