Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-27

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Mon, 16 December 2019 07:32 UTC

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From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: Ludwig Seitz <ludwig_seitz@gmx.de>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-27
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On Sat, Dec 14, 2019 at 05:20:34PM +0100, Ludwig Seitz wrote:
> On 2019-12-12 21:44, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker wrote:
> > ====
> >     o  A RS sending a "cnonce" parameter in an an AS Request Creation
> > SB> An RS...
> 
> This doesn't feel right, since there is no consonant in RS and the R in
> "Resource Server" (the expansion of RS) is not silent either. Is there a
> grammar rule that I'm unaware of?
> 
> You did however make me aware of a typo later in that sentence where
> there it says: "an an".

I think you would say "a resource server" but "an ar ess".

-Ben