[Ace] [IANA #1284521] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm (core-parameters, if=)

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Hi Carsten, Jaime, and Christian (cc: ace WG),

Following up on this; as the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the updated proposed registrations in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-18 for us? You had previously reviewed draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17. This document has already been approved for publication by the IESG.

The authors have added a new "ace.groups" proposed registration in addition to the previously reviewed "ace.group".

Please see:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/

Could you please review at your earliest convenience?

If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make the registrations at:

https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/

Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the first response we receive.

With thanks,

David Dong
IANA Services Sr. Specialist


On Mon Feb 12 16:45:22 2024, david.dong wrote:
> Hi Carsten, Jaime, and Christian (cc: ace WG),
> 
> As the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=) Link
> Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the updated proposed
> registrations in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-18 for us? You had
> previously reviewed draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17. This document has
> already been approved for publication by the IESG.
> 
> The authors have added a new "ace.groups" proposed registration in
> addition to the previously reviewed "ace.group".
> 
> Please see:
> 
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/
> 
> Could you please review at your earliest convenience?
> 
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
> we'll make the registrations at:
> 
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> 
> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the
> first response we receive.
> 
> With thanks,
> 
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> 
> On Fri Feb 02 22:02:31 2024, david.dong wrote:
> > Hi Carsten, Jaime, and Christian (cc: ace WG),
> >
> > As the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=) Link
> > Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the updated proposed
> > registrations in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-18 for us? You had
> > previously reviewed draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17. This document
> > has
> > already been approved for publication by the IESG.
> >
> > The authors have added a new "ace.groups" proposed registration in
> > addition to the previously reviewed "ace.group".
> >
> > Please see:
> >
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/
> >
> > The assigned due date was February 2nd; as this document has already
> > been approved for publication, could you please review at your
> > earliest convenience?
> >
> > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
> > we'll make the registrations at:
> >
> > https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> >
> > Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the
> > first response we receive.
> >
> > With thanks,
> >
> > David Dong
> > IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> >
> > On Fri Jan 26 18:24:43 2024, david.dong wrote:
> > > Hi Carsten, Jaime, and Christian (cc: ace WG),
> > >
> > > As the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=) Link
> > > Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the updated
> > > proposed
> > > registrations in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-18 for us? You have
> > > previously review draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17. This document
> > > has
> > > already been approved for publication by the IESG.
> > >
> > > The authors have added a new "ace.groups" proposed registration in
> > > addition to the previously reviewed "ace.group".
> > >
> > > Please see:
> > >
> > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/
> > >
> > > The assigned due date was February 2nd, but as this document has
> > > already been approved for publication, could you please review at
> > > your
> > > earliest convenience?
> > >
> > > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
> > > we'll make the registrations at:
> > >
> > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > >
> > > Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on the
> > > first response we receive.
> > >
> > > With thanks,
> > >
> > > David Dong
> > > IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > >
> > > On Fri Jan 19 20:18:26 2024, david.dong wrote:
> > > > Hi Carsten, Jaime, and Christian (cc: ace WG),
> > > >
> > > > As the designated experts for the Interface Description (if=)
> > > > Link
> > > > Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the updated
> > > > proposed
> > > > registrations in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-18 for us? You have
> > > > previously review draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17.
> > > >
> > > > The authors have added a new "ace.groups" proposed registration
> > > > in
> > > > addition to the previously reviewed "ace.group".
> > > >
> > > > Please see:
> > > >
> > > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm/
> > > >
> > > > The due date is February 2nd.
> > > >
> > > > If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > publication,
> > > > we'll make the registrations at:
> > > >
> > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > >
> > > > Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act on
> > > > the
> > > > first response we receive.
> > > >
> > > > With thanks,
> > > >
> > > > David Dong
> > > > IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > >
> > > > On Wed Nov 29 00:41:26 2023, cabo@tzi.org wrote:
> > > > > Hi Amanda,
> > > > >
> > > > > my apologies for the tardy response.
> > > > >
> > > > > The registration of this if= type is fundamentally appropriate.
> > > > > However, there are some aspects of its description that could
> > > > > use
> > > > > improvement.
> > > > >
> > > > > * The description uses the term ‘ace group’ to stand for
> > > > > ace.group.
> > > > > That could be confusing, but probably will not lead to
> > > > > interoperability problems.
> > > > >
> > > > > * The description could be pointing to Section 4.1 (of course,
> > > > > a
> > > > > search will also find that section).
> > > > >
> > > > > * Section 4.1 defines a number of resources.  Which of these is
> > > > > the
> > > > > one that the link marked if= should point to?  One might think
> > > > > that
> > > > > it
> > > > > is the one named /ace-group as an example, and not the
> > > > > individual
> > > > > ones
> > > > > named /ace-group/GROUPNAME.  However, the examples in draft-
> > > > > tiloca-
> > > > > core-oscore-discovery indicate otherwise.
> > > > > It would be preferable to make the answer to this question
> > > > > explicit
> > > > > in
> > > > > ace-key-groupcomm (an example for such a link in ace-key-
> > > > > groupcomm
> > > > > would also help).
> > > > > Deferring much of the actual definition of the if= type to
> > > > > draft-
> > > > > tiloca-core-oscore-discovery while already registering it here
> > > > > does
> > > > > not work very well for this specification reader.
> > > > >
> > > > > Grüße, Carsten
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > [1]: https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-tiloca-core-oscore-
> > > > > discovery-14.html
> > > > >
> > > > > On Nov 28, 2023, at 19:28, Amanda Baber via RT <drafts-expert-
> > > > > review-
> > > > > comment@iana.org> wrote:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss
> > > > > > (cc:
> > > > > > ace
> > > > > > WG),
> > > > > >
> > > > > > This is a reminder that if we don't receive an approval from
> > > > > > one
> > > > > > of
> > > > > > the experts by tomorrow, we'll have to mark this document
> > > > > > "IANA
> > > > > > NOT
> > > > > > OK" and request a DISCUSS for Thursday's telechat.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > thanks,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Amanda Baber
> > > > > > IANA Operations Manager
> > > > > >
> > > > > > On Mon Nov 27 23:52:56 2023, david.dong wrote:
> > > > > >> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss
> > > > > >> (cc:
> > > > > >> ace
> > > > > >> WG),
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for
> > > > > >> the
> > > > > >> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values
> > > > > >> registry,
> > > > > >> can
> > > > > >> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >> groupcomm-
> > > > > >> 17 for us?
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> This document is on the agenda for the upcoming November
> > > > > >> 30th
> > > > > >> IESG
> > > > > >> telechat.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Please see:
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >> groupcomm/
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> The due date was November 9th.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > > >> publication,
> > > > > >> we'll make the registration at:
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll act
> > > > > >> on
> > > > > >> the
> > > > > >> first response we receive.
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> With thanks,
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> David Dong
> > > > > >> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > > > >>
> > > > > >> On Tue Nov 21 17:55:47 2023, david.dong wrote:
> > > > > >>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss
> > > > > >>> (cc:
> > > > > >>> ace
> > > > > >>> WG),
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts for
> > > > > >>> the
> > > > > >>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values
> > > > > >>> registry,
> > > > > >>> can
> > > > > >>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >>> groupcomm-
> > > > > >>> 17 for us? This document is on the agenda for the upcoming
> > > > > >>> November
> > > > > >>> 30th IESG telechat.
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> Please see:
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >>> groupcomm/
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> The due date was November 9th.
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > > >>> publication,
> > > > > >>> we'll make the registration at:
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll
> > > > > >>> act
> > > > > >>> on
> > > > > >>> the
> > > > > >>> first response we receive.
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> With thanks,
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> David Dong
> > > > > >>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > > > >>>
> > > > > >>> On Tue Nov 14 18:07:19 2023, david.dong wrote:
> > > > > >>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss
> > > > > >>>> (cc:
> > > > > >>>> ace
> > > > > >>>> WG),
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts
> > > > > >>>> for
> > > > > >>>> the
> > > > > >>>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values
> > > > > >>>> registry,
> > > > > >>>> can
> > > > > >>>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-
> > > > > >>>> key-
> > > > > >>>> groupcomm-
> > > > > >>>> 17 for us? Please see:
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >>>> groupcomm/
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> The due date was November 9th.
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > > >>>> publication,
> > > > > >>>> we'll make the registration at:
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll
> > > > > >>>> act
> > > > > >>>> on
> > > > > >>>> the
> > > > > >>>> first response we receive.
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> With thanks,
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> David Dong
> > > > > >>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>>
> > > > > >>>> On Thu Nov 02 21:36:51 2023, david.dong wrote:
> > > > > >>>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian Amsüss
> > > > > >>>>> (cc:
> > > > > >>>>> ace
> > > > > >>>>> WG),
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> Following up on this request; as the designated experts
> > > > > >>>>> for
> > > > > >>>>> the
> > > > > >>>>> Interface Description (if=) Link Target Attribute Values
> > > > > >>>>> registry,
> > > > > >>>>> can
> > > > > >>>>> you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-
> > > > > >>>>> key-
> > > > > >>>>> groupcomm-
> > > > > >>>>> 17 for us? Please see:
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >>>>> groupcomm/
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> The due date is November 9th.
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > > >>>>> publication,
> > > > > >>>>> we'll make the registration at:
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll
> > > > > >>>>> act
> > > > > >>>>> on
> > > > > >>>>> the
> > > > > >>>>> first response we receive.
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> With thanks,
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> David Dong
> > > > > >>>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > > > >>>>>
> > > > > >>>>> On Thu Oct 26 16:03:57 2023, david.dong wrote:
> > > > > >>>>>> Dear Carsten Bormann, Jaime Jimenez, and Christian
> > > > > >>>>>> Amsüss
> > > > > >>>>>> (cc:
> > > > > >>>>>> ace
> > > > > >>>>>> WG),
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> As the designated experts for the Interface Description
> > > > > >>>>>> (if=)
> > > > > >>>>>> Link
> > > > > >>>>>> Target Attribute Values registry, can you review the
> > > > > >>>>>> proposed
> > > > > >>>>>> registration in draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17 for us?
> > > > > >>>>>> Please
> > > > > >>>>>> see:
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ace-key-
> > > > > >>>>>> groupcomm/
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> The due date is November 9th.
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for
> > > > > >>>>>> publication,
> > > > > >>>>>> we'll make the registration at:
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/core-parameters/
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we’ll
> > > > > >>>>>> act
> > > > > >>>>>> on
> > > > > >>>>>> the
> > > > > >>>>>> first response we receive.
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> With thanks,
> > > > > >>>>>>
> > > > > >>>>>> David Dong
> > > > > >>>>>> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
> > > > > >