Re: [Ace] Zaheduzzaman Sarker's No Objection on draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17: (with COMMENT)

[Marco Tiloca <[e-mail]>]

Hello Zaheduzzaman,

Thanks a lot for your review! Please find in line below our detailed 
replies to your comments.

A Github PR where we have addressed your comments is available at [PR].

Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the 
other ones related to other received reviews), and to submit the result 
as version -18 of the document.

Thanks,
/Marco

[PR] https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-key-groupcomm/pull/163

On 2023-11-28 13:16, Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker wrote:
> Zaheduzzaman Sarker has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17: No Objection
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> Thanks for working on this document.
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> Thanks  Vidhi Goel for the TSVART review. However, I have noticed this review
> didn't get any responses from the authors or wg. Please respond.

==>MT

Please see our response at: 
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ace/eMtIBg3ZyRvVuyjzaQ-g9MeTuek/

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> I have hard time understanding the example used for individual keying material.
> what is this "member identifier" ? where is this defined?

==>MT

We have clarified by rephrasing as follows.

OLD
 > * Individual keying material: information exclusively pertaining to a 
group member, as associated with its group membership and related to 
other keying material and parameters used in the group. For example, 
this can be a member identifier that is unique within the group. The 
specific nature and format of individual keying material used in a group 
is defined in application profiles of this specification.

NEW (emphasis mine)
 > * Individual keying material: information exclusively pertaining to a 
group member, as associated with its group membership and related to 
other keying material and parameters used in the group. For example, 
this can be **an identifier that the secure communication protocol 
employs to uniquely identify a node as a group member (e.g., a 
cryptographic key identifier uniquely associated with the group member 
in question).** The specific nature and format of individual keying 
material used in a group is defined in application profiles of this 
specification.

As per the last sentence, further details are defined in the specific 
application profiles.

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