Re: [Ace] [IANA #1270804] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport (cmp)

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From: "Brockhaus, Hendrik" <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [IANA #1270804] expert review for draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-transport (cmp)
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The changes submitted with version -09 of the draft addressed my concerns. Thanks to Paul for reporting them.
I have nothing to add regarding CMP well-known URIs.

I cannot do the review on the text regarding the CoAP Content-Formats registry because I am no expert there.

Hendrik

> Von: David Dong via RT <drafts-expert-review-comment@iana.org>
> 
> Dear Hendrik Brockhaus, David von Oheimb and John Gray (cc: ace WG),
> 
> As the designated experts for the CMP Well-Known URI Path Segments
> registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-
> coap-transport for us? Please see
> 
> https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatr
> acker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-ace-cmpv2-coap-
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> The due date is April 27, 2023.
> 
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll
> make the registration at:
> 
> https://eur01.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.
> iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fcmp%2F&data=05%7C01%7Chendrik.brockhaus
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> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewers, we'll act on the first
> response we receive.
> 
> With thanks,
> 
> David Dong
> IANA Services Specialist