[Acme] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-06: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 16 January 2023 11:51 UTC

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Subject: [Acme] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-06: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-06: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-acme-subdomains-06

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Theresa Enghardt for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ZBP6EEClZDyPV5IPFb3tTZWKjC8).

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

#### Section 4.3, paragraph 11
```
-    indiciated identifier, there is no need for the server to include the
-         -
```

### Grammar/style

#### Section 5, paragraph 23
```
ecurity Considerations This document documents enhancements to ACME [RFC8555]
                            ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
```
You repeated a verb. Please check.

## Notes

This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the
[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT].

[ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md
[ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments
[IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool

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