[Add] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11

[Jiankang Yao via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area
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Document: draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2024-06-01

Summary: Ready for publication.

This document is clear and in good shape.

One suggestion:

In section 2 Terminology,

"
  Encrypted DNS
A DNS protocol that provides an encrypted channel between a DNS client and
server (e.g., DNS over TLS (DoT) [RFC7858], HTTPS (DoH) [RFC8484], QUIC (DoQ)
[RFC9250]).

Split-Horizon DNS
The DNS service provided by a resolver that also acts as an authoritative
server for some names, providing resolution results that are meaningfully
different from those in the Global DNS. (See "Split DNS" in Section 6 of
[RFC9499].)

"
Encrypted ‘DNS’ is defined as "Protocol" while Split-Horizon ‘DNS’ is defined
as "service". Same "DNS" points to different things.

How about changing "Encrypted DNS"  to "Encrypted DNS Protocols"?

Best Regards
Jiankang Yao