[Add] Re: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11
tirumal reddy <kondtir@gmail.com> Sun, 02 June 2024 13:32 UTC
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From: tirumal reddy <kondtir@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 02 Jun 2024 19:01:34 +0530
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Thanks for the review, please see inline On Sun, 2 Jun 2024 at 09:05, Jiankang Yao via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Reviewer: Jiankang Yao > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned ART-ART reviewer for this draft. The Art Area > Review Team (ART-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > Document: draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority-11 > Reviewer: Jiankang Yao > Review Date: 2024-06-01 > > Summary: Ready for publication. > > This document is clear and in good shape. > > One suggestion: > > In section 2 Terminology, > > " > Encrypted DNS > A DNS protocol that provides an encrypted channel between a DNS client and > server (e.g., DNS over TLS (DoT) [RFC7858], HTTPS (DoH) [RFC8484], QUIC > (DoQ) > [RFC9250]). > > Split-Horizon DNS > The DNS service provided by a resolver that also acts as an authoritative > server for some names, providing resolution results that are meaningfully > different from those in the Global DNS. (See "Split DNS" in Section 6 of > [RFC9499].) > > " > Encrypted ‘DNS’ is defined as "Protocol" while Split-Horizon ‘DNS’ is > defined > as "service". Same "DNS" points to different things. > > How about changing "Encrypted DNS" to "Encrypted DNS Protocols"? > "Encrypted DNS" is already used in the terminology of other RFCs, like https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/rfc9463/ -Tiru > > Best Regards > Jiankang Yao > > > >
- [Add] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-add-s… Jiankang Yao via Datatracker
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