Re: [Add] I-D Action: draft-ietf-add-dnr-04.txt

Now that the SvcPriority is included in the payload, I would suggest moving
the IP addresses to the beginning of the payload.  That would allow the
remainder to be syntactically identical to SVCB RDATA, so it can be
synthesized and parsed using the exact same code used for SVCB records.
(It would also save one byte.)

As I mentioned previously I would also prefer to provide the _count_ of IP
addresses, rather than the _length_ of the IP address field.  This avoids
the potential for memory safety vulnerabilities when Addr Length is
impossible (e.g. 13) and saves one byte for IPv6.

On Thu, Dec 9, 2021 at 1:59 AM <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> This version fixes an issue about DHCP option ordering: we used to rely
> upon the options appearance but this is against RFC7227.
>
> We also made some editorial changes to clean the reference to the
> deployment I-D.
>
> Looking forward seeing the I-D in WGLC.
>
> Cheers,
> Med
>
> > -----Message d'origine-----
> > De : Add <add-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de internet-drafts@ietf.org
> > Envoyé : jeudi 9 décembre 2021 07:52
> > À : i-d-announce@ietf.org
> > Cc : add@ietf.org
> > Objet : [Add] I-D Action: draft-ietf-add-dnr-04.txt
> >
> >
> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> > directories.
> > This draft is a work item of the Adaptive DNS Discovery WG of the IETF.
> >
> >         Title           : DHCP and Router Advertisement Options for the
> > Discovery of Network-designated Resolvers (DNR)
> >         Authors         : Mohamed Boucadair
> >                           Tirumaleswar Reddy
> >                           Dan Wing
> >                           Neil Cook
> >                           Tommy Jensen
> >       Filename        : draft-ietf-add-dnr-04.txt
> >       Pages           : 21
> >       Date            : 2021-12-08
> >
> > Abstract:
> >    The document specifies new DHCP and IPv6 Router Advertisement options
> >    to discover encrypted DNS servers (e.g., DNS-over-HTTPS, DNS-over-
> >    TLS, DNS-over-QUIC).  Particularly, it allows to learn an
> >    authentication domain name together with a list of IP addresses and a
> >    set of service parameters to reach such encrypted DNS servers.
> >
> >
> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-add-dnr/
> >
> > There is also an htmlized version available at:
> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-add-dnr-04
> >
> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-add-dnr-04
> >
> >
> > Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-
> > drafts
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