Re: [Add] New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt
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Subject: Re: [Add] New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt
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Thanks - > [Med] This would exclude the case of a terminal (without any tethering activated) that connects to the mobile network and retrieves the discovery information (using RA, for example). That was what my (2), was intended to describe, but I probably didn't describe it correctly. If that is in-scope then I am fine with the title, but I think it at least needs addition of an architecture diagram to show that case. Regards Iain -----Original Message----- From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Sent: 18 March 2020 10:48 To: Iain Sharp <isharp@atis.org>; ADD Mailing list (add@ietf.org) <add@ietf.org> Subject: [EXT] RE: New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt Re-, Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Iain Sharp [mailto:isharp@atis.org] Envoyé : mercredi 18 mars > 2020 10:55 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; ADD Mailing list > (add@ietf.org) Objet : RE: New Version Notification for > draft-btw-add-home-04.txt > > Hi > > Thanks for the clarification text. > > > (2) is definitely out of scope. > > That being the case, then maybe a revision of the title to this would > be useful: "DNS-over-HTTPS and DNS-over-TLS Server Discovery and > Deployment Considerations for Home Networks and Mobile Tethering" [Med] This would exclude the case of a terminal (without any tethering activated) that connects to the mobile network and retrieves the discovery information (using RA, for example). > > I think that would really help make clear that the topic is 1) and not > 2). > > On terminology, 3GPP uses "UE" for the device that attaches to the > mobile network which is one thing that confused me when reading the > document. [Med] I hear you. I think that changing "UE" to "host" would avoid the confusion. > > Regards > > Iain > > -----Original Message----- > From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> > Sent: 18 March 2020 09:30 > To: Iain Sharp <isharp@atis.org>; ADD Mailing list (add@ietf.org) > <add@ietf.org> > Subject: [EXT] RE: New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home- > 04.txt > > Hi Iain, > > (2) is definitely out of scope. > > I added this NEW text to my local copy: > > Hosts and/or CPEs may be connected to multiple networks; each > providing their own DNS configuration using the discovery > mechanisms > specified in this document. Nevertheless, it is out of the scope > of > this specification to discuss DNS selection of multi-interface > devices. The reader may refer to [RFC6731] for a discussion of > issues and an example of DNS server selection for multi-interfaced > devices. > > Thank you. > > Cheers, > Med > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > De : Iain Sharp [mailto:isharp@atis.org] Envoyé : mardi 17 mars 2020 > > 16:46 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; ADD Mailing list (add@ietf.org) > > Objet : RE: New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt > > > > Thanks Mohamed, > > > > Good points. I see two cases in mobile: > > 1) Where the mobile device is acting as a gateway between a cellular > > network and a local Wi-Fi network. This is what is often called > > "tethering" or a "personal hotspot" > > 2) The behaviour of the operating system and the applications on the > > mobile UE itself. > > > > From what you have said, it sounds like your intention is to cover > > case 1). I agree this has similarities to the residential case so I > > can see the sense in covering them together. > > > > However, case 2) is the typical case for a mobile which isn't being > > used as a personal hotspot. This case has its own issues: for > example, > > mobile UEs frequently move between Wi-Fi and cellular coverage and > may > > be simultaneously connected to both. Each access type may have a > > different local DNS service. > > > > If you can add clarity to the scope the text and title that seems > > sensible. If you want to cover case 2) fully then that might need an > > expanded discussion in the text. > > > > > > Regards > > > > Iain > > > > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com <mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> > > Sent: 17 March 2020 14:02 > > To: Iain Sharp <isharp@atis.org>; ADD Mailing list (add@ietf.org) > > <add@ietf.org> > > Subject: [EXT] RE: New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home- > > 04.txt > > > > Hi Iain, > > > > Thank you for sharing the comments. > > > > Please see inline. > > > > Cheers, > > Med > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > De : Iain Sharp [mailto:isharp@atis.org] Envoyé : mardi 17 mars > 2020 > > > 13:38 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; ADD Mailing list > (add@ietf.org) > > > Objet : RE: New Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt > > > > > > Thanks all for creating this draft. > > > > > > A few general comments: > > > > > > - I am not sure what the terms "LAN" and "CPE" mean in the context > > of > > > a mobile network. > > > > [Med] CPE (or home routers) can get connectivity via a Fixed > network, > > cellular network, or both (called, hybrid CPEs). "LAN" refers to the > > home network if you will. We are using these two notions > independently > > of how the WAN connectivity is provided. > > > > > > I think that probably the "LAN" is meant to be the > > > mobile network itself and the "CPE" is the mobile network's > Internet > > > gateway (GGSN, P-Gateway etc.). > > > > [Med] Actually, PGW can be seen as an access router in an ISP > network. > > > > Actually it is quite hard to model > > > mobile networks with all the layers of tunnelling etc., > particularly > > > if you include "tethering" of external devices to mobile UEs. Some > > > more clarity on this area and showing the mapping to normal mobile > > > network terminology would be helpful. > > > > [Med] Point taken. We will see how to make things more clear. We may > > point the reader to: > > * https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6459 (generic architecture) > > * https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7849#section-3 (CPE, devices with > > tethering features). > > > > > > > > > > - Section 3.2: There may be other scenarios that are relevant - > e.g. > > > the "Internal CPE" talking to a "3rd Party DNS Provider". > > > > [Med] Agree. We discuss that particular one in Section 8.2 (see > Figure > > 14). We may add cite it in 3.2. > > > > > > > > Editorial comments: > > > > > > - Section 3.1: "If a DNS client supports both DoT and DoH, the > > client > > > try to establish DoH/DoT sessions..." should be "If a DNS client > > > supports both DoT and DoH, the client *MAY* try to establish > DoH/DoT > > > sessions..." perhaps. > > > > > > > [Med] Fixed. Thank you. > > > > > Regards > > > > > > Iain > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > From: Add <add-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of > > > mohamed.boucadair@orange.com > > > Sent: 16 March 2020 13:12 > > > To: ADD Mailing list (add@ietf.org) <add@ietf.org> > > > Subject: [EXT] [Add] TR: New Version Notification for draft-btw- > add- > > > home-04.txt > > > > > > Hi all, > > > > > > We updated the draft to take into account the comments received so > > > far. The main changes are as follows: > > > * Add new sections to discuss unmanaged CPE scenarios (Sections > 3.2 > > > and 8.2) > > > * Add a new section to discuss URI templates discovery (Section > 5). > > > > > > Cheers, > > > Med > > > > > > -----Message d'origine----- > > > De : internet-drafts@ietf.org [mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org] > > > Envoyé : lundi 16 mars 2020 14:07 À : Tirumaleswar Reddy.K; Neil > > Cook; > > > Dan Wing; BOUCADAIR Mohamed TGI/OLN; Tirumaleswar Reddy Objet : > New > > > Version Notification for draft-btw-add-home-04.txt > > > > > > > > > A new version of I-D, draft-btw-add-home-04.txt has been > > > successfully submitted by Mohamed Boucadair and posted to > > the > > > IETF repository. > > > > > > Name: draft-btw-add-home > > > Revision: 04 > > > Title: DNS-over-HTTPS and DNS-over-TLS Server Discovery and > > > Deployment Considerations for Home and Mobile Networks > > > Document date: 2020-03-16 > > > Group: Individual Submission > > > Pages: 25 > > > URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-btw- > add- > > > home-04.txt > > > Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-btw-add- > home/ > > > Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-btw-add-home-04 > > > Htmlized: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-btw- > add- > > > home > > > Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-btw-add- > > home- > > > 04 > > > > > > Abstract: > > > This document discusses DoT/DoH deployment considerations for > > home > > > networks. It particularly sketches the required steps to use > > > DoT/DoH > > > capabilities provided by local networks. > > > > > > One of the goals of this document is to assess to what extent > > > existing tools can be used to provide a DoT/DoH service. As an > > > outcome, new DHCP and Router Advertisement Options are > specified > > in > > > order to convey a DNS Authentication Domain Name. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > > > submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at > > > tools.ietf.org. > > > > > > The IETF Secretariat > > > > > > > > > -- > > > Add mailing list > > > Add@ietf.org > > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/add
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