[alto] alto-oam-org

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Thu, 26 October 2023 11:25 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
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I commented on this I-D 25sep23.

I got a response from the document shepherd which addressed two of my points but not the others.  I never got a response from an author.

I note that -15 still has issues that I raised.  Two I notice are:

RFC9274 is in the text but not in the I-D References
172.17.0.2 is in the examples seemingly as an IP address but I do not see this in the list of documentation addresses

HTH (I see that today is IESG review day!)

Tom Petch