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Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Thu, 26 October 2023 11:47 UTC

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From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 26 Oct 2023 19:46:51 +0800
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Hi Tom,

Many thanks for following up on this document. Sorry to miss the issues.

We have fixed them in
https://github.com/ietf-wg-alto/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/pull/100 and will
merge the changes to the next revision.

Thanks,
Jensen


On Thu, Oct 26, 2023 at 7:25 PM tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> wrote:

> I commented on this I-D 25sep23.
>
> I got a response from the document shepherd which addressed two of my
> points but not the others.  I never got a response from an author.
>
> I note that -15 still has issues that I raised.  Two I notice are:
>
> RFC9274 is in the text but not in the I-D References
> 172.17.0.2 is in the examples seemingly as an IP address but I do not see
> this in the list of documentation addresses
>
> HTH (I see that today is IESG review day!)
>
> Tom Petch

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