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Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs

Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Tue, 23 May 2023 13:10 UTC

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From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 23 May 2023 21:10:13 +0800
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Subject: Re: [alto] draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang : Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs
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Hi Adrian,

Many thanks for your early review and quick comments.

On Mon, May 22, 2023 at 6:41 AM Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> wrote:

> Hi,
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> I looked at revision -07
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> This is a really big document and would probably benefit from a more
> detailed review than I was able to give it. But it looks fine and ready to
> progress to me.
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> A couple of nits…
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> Section 4.3 might usefully describe that this is an additional requirement.
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Although we have mentioned this in the subsection title, we will also
describe this in the text.


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> You might reference draft-ietf-netmod-rfc6991-bis instead of RFC6991.
> You’ll be behind it in the queue, so you can safely use it as a normative
> reference. That’ll be a bit more future-proof.
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Many thanks for the reminder. We will update the reference.

Thanks,
Jensen


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> Cheers,
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> Adrian
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> *From:* alto <alto-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of *Jordi Ros Giralt
> *Sent:* 17 May 2023 06:41
> *To:* alto@ietf.org
> *Subject:* [alto] Call for volunteers to review 2nd WGLC for ALTO docs
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> Hi ALTO WG:
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> As you know, we are in the process of issuing the 2nd WGLC for two of the
> ALTO drafts (New Transport and OAM). Thank you to all of you who have been
> working hard to help get these documents completed, including all the
> detailed feedback provided by reviewers during the first WGLC.
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> There is now a need (as mentioned by the chairs) to have as many eyes &
> volunteers review the docs to make sure they are in the best possible
> shape. I can volunteer to review both documents. Richard also volunteered,
> thank you Richard. We would like to suggest targeting two more volunteers.
> Could any of you help support this work?
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> We are targeting 22/05 to complete this new round of revisions, as that's
> the target day for the 2nd WGLC.
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> These are the docs:
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> - New Transport:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-new-transport/
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> - OAM: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-oam-yang/
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> Please feel free to forward this email if you know others (inside or
> ouside ALTO) who can help review the docs too.
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> As we are working to wrap up the current charter, this is very important
> work to ensure the quality of the documents produced by ALTO. Thank you for
> your collaboration.
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> Jordi, on behalf of ALTO
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