[alto] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 12 March 2020 03:46 UTC

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Subject: [alto] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: (with COMMENT)
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Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-alto-incr-update-sse-20: No Objection

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Thanks for the work on this document. I strongly agree with Suresh’s first
point, regarding the restatement of the merge algorithm. I have one additional
comment:

Section 3.1.2.1:

           "ipv4" : [ "192.0.2.0/24", "198.51.100.0/25",
                      "193.51.100.0/25" ],

The address "193.51.100.0" is from a block allocated to the University of
Paris. Please change it to an RFC 5737 documentation address. (This occurs
twice in the document)