Re: [Anima] appendix D removed!

"Max Pritikin (pritikin)" <pritikin@cisco.com> Tue, 03 October 2017 19:21 UTC

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From: "Max Pritikin (pritikin)" <pritikin@cisco.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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Fantastic!

It looks like you went ahead and dropped them all into Master. I’ll read through the diffs and comment if I have concerns (later this evening). 

- max

> On Oct 3, 2017, at 1:09 PM, Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> wrote:
> 
> 
> Max, as agreed in today's call, I went through the todo of edits, and did them:
> 
>   Proxy:
>        * Action: insert section betweeen 2.4 and 2.5 that indicates the
>               proxy is part of the architecture
> 
> DONE: new text at
>      https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtbootstrap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L851
> 
>     *                  if you are going to implement a proxy then you
>            should support a circuit proxy so that it works with all
>            registrars
> 
>     *      add a high level section between s5 and s6 that
>            details proxy discussion
> 
> DONE:
>  https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtbootstrap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L2084
> 
>     *
>          * Action: update figure 1 from "dead branch"
> 
> DONE:
> https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/component-diagram.txt
> 
>     * Action: move 4.1.2 to new section.
> 
> DONE:
> moved it.
> 
>     * Moving on in appendix D:
>          * [30]https://github.com/anima-wg/anima-bootstrap/blob/master/dtboots
>                 trap-anima-keyinfra.txt#L3341
>                      *
>                           * Maybe add section 2.0 about MASA to section 2,
>                             protocol overview.
> 
> DONE:
> the MASA part was up at L851 above.
> 
>     * Move section D.1.4 to section 1.3, with reference to ACP.
> 
> DONE:
> added new subsection to section 1.
> 
> Ripped appendix D.
> 
> Remaining TODO:
>          update the JRC discovery with the M_FLOOD method.
> 
> 
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works
> -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-
> 
> 
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