Re: [Anima] Adoption call on draft-eckert-anima-brski-discovery-01 by 2024/2/23rd

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 09 February 2024 19:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] Adoption call on draft-eckert-anima-brski-discovery-01 by 2024/2/23rd
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I fully support adoption of this draft. It's a very useful consolidation of information that is otherwise widely spread and hard to visualize.

We should pay attention later to clearly identify which sections are informative references to other documents, and which sections are new normative material. It's important that this document does not accidentally modify any other document.

Regards
    Brian

On 09-Feb-24 21:28, Sheng JIANG wrote:
> Hi, ANIMAers,
> 
> This email starts a two-week adoption call on draft-eckert-anima-brski-discovery-01. It ends by 2024/2/23rd.
> 
> This draft is not new as normal -01 individual draft. It is coalesced from the discovery options parts of several ANIMA WG documents:
> 
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-constrained-voucher
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-constrained-proxy
> 
> 
> It has been introduced and discussed during the Prague meeting. Hence, the ANIMA chairs think it has a reasonable good foundation for adoption. Please express your opinions on whether this document is meaningful for our ANIMA WG by the ending time 2024/2/23rd. The writing quality of this document is a late consideration after WG adoption.
> 
> Regards,
> 
> 
> Sheng JIANG
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