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Subject: Re: [Anima] Adoption call on draft-eckert-anima-brski-discovery-01 by 2024/2/23rd
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I have read the document, and I support its adoption by the WG.

I also second the comments given by Brian, Michael, and Steffen.

Finally, I believe that an important first goal will be to resolve all 
of the references to "Section 1", because it is very difficult to 
understand the alternatives being listed when they are all called 
"Section 1".

   Bill

On 2/9/2024 3:28 AM, Sheng JIANG wrote:
> Attention This email originates from outside the concordia.ca domain. // Ce courriel provient de l'extérieur du domaine de concordia.ca
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> Hi, ANIMAers,
> 
> This email starts a two-week adoption call on draft-eckert-anima-brski-discovery-01. It ends by 2024/2/23rd.
> 
> This draft is not new as normal -01 individual draft. It is coalesced from the discovery options parts of several ANIMA WG documents:
> 
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-prm
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-ae
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-constrained-voucher
>      draft-ietf-anima-brski-constrained-proxy
> 
> 
> It has been introduced and discussed during the Prague meeting. Hence, the ANIMA chairs think it has a reasonable good foundation for adoption. Please express your opinions on whether this document is meaningful for our ANIMA WG by the ending time 2024/2/23rd. The writing quality of this document is a late consideration after WG adoption.
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> Regards,
> 
> 
> Sheng JIANG
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