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Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Thu, 23 November 2023 19:31 UTC

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To: Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl>, "anima@ietf.org" <anima@ietf.org>
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Comments: In-reply-to Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl> message dated "Tue, 21 Nov 2023 17:05:02 +0000."
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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-constrained-voucher-22.txt
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Esko Dijk <esko.dijk@iotconsultancy.nl> wrote:
    > This update reflects the work that was done earlier (August) to
    > restructure the content of "cBRSKI". Now the default, simplest flow is
    > highlighted and optional extras are moved into separate sections: in
    > particular, the extended discovery now in Section 14.  Some content has

Thank you for all the work on this document.

I think that where it says that it updates RFC8366bis, it probably should
just recap what 8366bis says (and that document should say it).
I guess that requires further document coordination work.

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Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works
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