Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.txt

Hi Brian,

	Thanks for your reply, allowing me to modify the draft better.
	Because of my lack of understanding of the CDDL format, some definitions are misunderstood. I update Figure 2 according to RFC8610, and hope this version is clearer. If there are lack of standardization, please let me know.

    	-----------------------------------------------------------
	UPDATE : Format of autonomic-network-service-value-value

	autonomic-network-service-value = [
	[
		service-type : uint,
		service-id : uint,
		service-lifetime : uint,
		service-tag
	],[
		*resource-requirement-pair
		]
	]

	service-type = 0..7
	service-id = uint
	service-lifetime = 0..4294967295 ; in milliseconds
	service-tag = [ *service-tag-info]
	service-tag-info = str

	resource-requirement-pair = (
		resource-type: uint,
		resource-value: uint
	)

	resource-type = 0..7
	resource-value = uint
	-----------------------------------------------------------

Best Regards

Yujing Zhou

-----Original Message-----
From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> 
Sent: 2022年10月25日 8:46
To: anima@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.txt

Hi,

I'm still not fully understanding the notation used in Figure 2 at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.html#section-5-8

There is an expansion of service-information in CDDL just below the figure, but if you want conforming implementations, I think you need to fully expand autonomic-network-service-value in CDDL, or define carefully how Figure 2 is to be understood.

Regards
    Brian

On 25-Oct-22 03:37, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>          Title           : A Generic Autonomic Deployment and Management Mechanism for Resource-based Network Services
>          Authors         : Yujing Zhou
>                            Joanna Dang
>                            Sheng Jiang
>                            Zongpeng Du
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.txt
>    Pages           : 16
>    Date            : 2022-10-24
> 
> Abstract:
>     This document specifies an autonomic mechanism for resource-based
>     network services deployment and management, using the GeneRic
>     Autonomic Signaling Protocol (GRASP) defined in [RFC8990] to
>     dynamically exchange the information among the autonomic nodes.  It
>     supports the coordination and consistently operations within an
>     autonomic network domain.  This mechanism is generic for most, if not
>     all, of kinds of network resources, although this document only
>     defines the process of quality transmission service deployment and
>     management.  It can be easily extended to support network services
>     deployment and management that is based on other types ofnetwork
>     resources.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto
> -deployment/
> 
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> -auto-deployment-03
> 
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> o-deployment-03
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