Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Tue, 25 October 2022 00:46 UTC

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Hi,

I'm still not fully understanding the notation used in Figure 2 at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.html#section-5-8

There is an expansion of service-information in CDDL just below the figure, but if you want conforming implementations, I think you need to fully expand autonomic-network-service-value in CDDL, or define carefully how Figure 2 is to be understood.

Regards
    Brian

On 25-Oct-22 03:37, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>          Title           : A Generic Autonomic Deployment and Management Mechanism for Resource-based Network Services
>          Authors         : Yujing Zhou
>                            Joanna Dang
>                            Sheng Jiang
>                            Zongpeng Du
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03.txt
>    Pages           : 16
>    Date            : 2022-10-24
> 
> Abstract:
>     This document specifies an autonomic mechanism for resource-based
>     network services deployment and management, using the GeneRic
>     Autonomic Signaling Protocol (GRASP) defined in [RFC8990] to
>     dynamically exchange the information among the autonomic nodes.  It
>     supports the coordination and consistently operations within an
>     autonomic network domain.  This mechanism is generic for most, if not
>     all, of kinds of network resources, although this document only
>     defines the process of quality transmission service deployment and
>     management.  It can be easily extended to support network services
>     deployment and management that is based on other types ofnetwork
>     resources.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment/
> 
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-network-service-auto-deployment-03
> 
> 
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